- Erotic Poetry
- When Love Sparks
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Click hereLove wakes you up.
Love feels fierce.
Love isn’t stagnant.
It keeps moving and growing.
Love is a pit in your stomach.
A sinful thought during the day.
When love awakens you,
When love is so fierce you do anything for a taste,
When love is moving and growing, ever changing and never stagnant.
You feel your pulse raceing,
When you fall in love,
The butterflies swarm.
When you fall in lust and your sinful thoughts combust
When Love comes around,
Will you go back to sleep OR, let his heart caress you,
as you fall, and fall deep.
- COMMENTS
Hotcoffee12319 days agoAuthorI agree with you, it is disjointed. I wasn’t sure what I was trying to say, but I needed to say it somehow. We learned about free form in class and this came out. Just a word salad about a feeling. Which is exactly how it feels. .
It’s a little bit scary how you always decode it.
Frodov19 days agoOkay… I’ve read this multiple times now. In the first reading, while found every line descriptive on its own. The many feelings and reactions we have to love are all familiar and identifiable to anyone who has experienced it for themselves… I still got the impression ( forgive me) that it was a bit disjointed.
However, with subsequent readings, it dawned on me that that is exactly how many of us feel while we are discovering these emotions and feelings. Like “Is this even real? Am I imagining all this? What is happening to me?” Yeah, we’ve all experienced the self doubt and uncertainty before letting ourselves get carried away with the wonder and joy it all entails. When I look at this piece as more of a free-form exclamation it makes sense. <Smile> bravo! “…deep…” absolutely
