Obedient Ch. 09

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Matt and Hannah learn about Sophie's past.
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Part 9 of the 10 part series

Updated 01/13/2024
Created 12/26/2021
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"Come over here. Have a seat! Have a seat!"

I walked into the living room, feeling like I had just woken up from a dream. The ever-present fog of living under Sophie's influence had been whisked away and I felt like I was thinking clearly for the first time in months. With that clarity, I became aware of just how nude I was. I was also fresh out of alternatives so I just awkwardly held my junk in my hands. My cock was still rock hard and the coverage was less than perfect.

Hannah and I both took a seat on the couch opposite the strange man in our living room. He was older than the rest of us by a decade or two and he was reclining in a chair like he owned the place. Despite a head of hair that was graying at the edges, the man still looked like a movie star. He was calmly taking in the sight of us. I felt heat rush to my cheeks. Standing there under his gaze felt so overwhelming. I couldn't put words to it, except that it felt just like having Sophie's attention. You can feel every cell in your body practically thrumming when Sophie is concentrating on you. This man, whoever he was, had the same effect. Only it was somehow more overpowering.

The dream-like feeling of the moment continued when I saw that Sophie was kneeling at his feet and gazing up at him like an adoring pet. How the fuck did he manage that? I wondered. Who the hell do you have to be to have Sophie on her knees? I felt a pit settle in my stomach when I realized that Hannah and I had thoughtlessly obeyed this man's command also. I glanced over at Hannah and she looked just as shell-shocked as I felt.

"Who are you?" I asked.

The man smiled. "I am sorry for dropping in like this. Please relax. I'm an old friend of Sophie's." Despite myself, I did relax. The queasy feeling in my stomach evaporated. I noticed Hannah unwind a bit. She settled into the couch.

On the floor, Sophie was bouncing up and down. "Please Daddy!" she begged in a voice I'd never heard come out of her mouth before. He nodded and she instantly reached for his belt and started undoing it.

"My name is Declan," he said looking back at me and Hannah. My gaze kept flicking from his face to the sight of my wife Sophie, pulling his cock out of his pants and slurping up his length like he was the only one in the room. I felt my chest grow tight and my face flame with jealousy. I think his command to relax was the only thing keeping me in my seat.

Declan noticed me watching. "Oh, don't mind her. She can't help herself. Maybe later they'll be time for you two to give her a hand."

"Do you think?" Hannah said. She sounded absolutely desperate for the chance to kneel in front of Declan and offer up her mouth.

Almost as soon as the thought crossed my mind, I felt myself warming up to it. I didn't know this Declan at all. He entered my home and ordered me around while my wife sucked him off. I should have been pissed. I should have been freaking out. But I wasn't. I felt safe with him. He was in control. It was just a fact of the universe. I didn't think I'd ever get on my knees for a man, but maybe for him I could. I watched as Sophie licked up his thick shaft. No, I could definitely see myself doing that.

Declan smiled, "We can get back to that later. You two aren't my toys to play with. I have to remember that. But like all good Daddies, if I see a toy being mistreated, I have to step in. So that's why I decided to drop by."

"I'm sure you're both wondering what the hell is going on."

We nodded in unison.

Declan smiled. "I know you're quite familiar with Sophie's...um...abilities. Have you ever met anyone like her before?"

"There are other Sophies?" Hannah asked, incredulous. "Like other people who can control minds?"

"I kinda thought she was a special case..." I added.

"Oh, she is special. Very special, I'd say." Declan lovingly stroked her cheek. Sophie responded by loudly slurping the head of his cock. I felt a shiver run through my whole body. God, I wish that were me sitting there with Sophie gagging on my cock, I thought.

"Sophie is not the only one with her power. Has she ever told you where it came from?"

We shook our heads.

"So she hasn't mentioned me?"

We shook our heads again.

"Well, then, I better start from the beginning. I think it's important you both know what you're dealing with. I feel bad for leaving you in the dark for so long. It might be helpful for you to think of me as a god. It's not as formal as all that, but I think it's useful for you. Call me the God of Desire or the God of Will perhaps. It's not a job title, just a description of what I do. I do hold a real power that is far older than me and that even I do not understand fully. I am not the first person to hold this power, nor will I be the last. For the present, I am its vessel. I contain it, but more importantly I wield it."

He smiled down at Sophie. "It is also too much for one man to wield. The power needs to be used. Think of a release valve. Only I can't release enough pressure by myself. So the power allows me to bestow small pieces of it on other people. Years ago, I met a young girl at a restaurant. She was inexperienced at life and in over her head in many ways, but I could sense right away that she was someone who could take control. There was a goddess in her waiting to come out. So I gave her some of my power. And that is how she is able to command obedience from you and everyone else she comes across."

"Who else have you given this power to?" Hannah asked.

Declan laughed. "A few others. I try to be choosy. Mostly I have chosen well." At this, Declan looked a little uncomfortable. "I recognize that things have gotten a little out of hand here. I take responsibility for that. I only hope you'll forgive me and even Sophie with time. And that is actually why I came to speak with you both today. I could use your help."

We looked at each other. "What do you need from us?" I asked. The idea seemed pretty ridiculous.

"Well, I have a favor to ask of Sophie, but when I came to find her I found a woman drunk on her own power and treating the people in her charge cruelly. I need her to be humbled a bit."

I glanced down at Sophie. She was so invested in sucking Declan's cock that she seemed not to be paying attention to the conversation whatsoever.

"You two, I hope, will be the bucket of cold water that will shock her out of this."

"How will we do that?" asked Hannah.

"I think that part could be quite fun for you. Perhaps you'd enjoy a little bit of comeuppance after all she's put you through? I would like to leave Sophie with you for one full day. Twenty-four hours. But before I go, I will make her entirely obedient to you both. Just as you were forced to do whatever she said, she will find your commands completely irresistible."

My pulse quickened. I couldn't even imagine what that would be like.

"Would you like that?"

I nodded hesitantly. "I think so. I don't know where to begin." I glanced over at Hannah. She looked game too.

Declan chuckled. "I'm sure you'll think of something. Now, after you give her an attitude adjustment, we'll be able to have a more productive conversation I feel. So what do you say?"

"We'll do it."

"Fantastic!" He clapped his hands together. He leaned Sophie back and stood up. She whimpered as he tucked his manhood back in his pants. "No, Daddy, please!"

He held a hand up to shush her. She instantly fell silent. "Sophie," he said, "you will sleep in a moment and when you wake up you will spend one day at the mercy of Matthew and Hannah. You will follow their every command." His voice wasn't even directed at me, but he was in the same room and speaking so forcefully. My mind was folding in on itself under the weight of his words. I could barely think straight. I had no commands to obey, but that's all I wanted to do. Just obey, obey, obey.

"After they have finished with you, come find me. We must talk."

As soon as the last word left his lips, Sophie's eyes fluttered and she passed out on the carpet. Declan gingerly stepped over her sleeping form. "Don't forget that after tomorrow she'll resume her power over you. I think, however, that you'll find her to be a much more pleasant goddess from now on. Thank you both."

And with that he left us sitting in my living room in stunned silence while Sophie snored at our feet.

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Satyam4005Satyam400518 days ago

Umm, I'm curious about the next parts now

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