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tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
ONES MORTALITY

from which Zero can not withhold

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
harsh

And grounding

The end verse is well done

Love the rhyme of joy and toys it contrasts well an d leaves a sound echo on the end of an interesting write.

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