All Comments on 'After Hours with Ornella'

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AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

Great story! Hope there's more to come :)

CaSlutCaSlut26 days ago

Fantastic. Hopefully Ornella will need clean up duty later.

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

This was a great first story. Would be interesting to get more of these characters.

MistressAyeshaMistressAyesha26 days ago

Really enjoyed reading this story. Little boi-toys like Danny needs to be shown their place in the world. Worshipping a real cock, a girl cock.

Hope to read more of your work dear. đź’‹

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Loved it xD really hoping for more chapters with those to.

Really like the idea he is a orphan with no real support structure around.. ( no tight friend group ) he put every thing into college to get a great job..barely scrapped by his current jobb( side jobs to pay for college tock upp to much time )..only got hired by boss because she liked how

subby he was in the interview xD all leads to his unhealthy attachment to his boss. He has nothing to losse so gladly does face showing porn for his boss( she wears a mask xD ) to keep her happy and turned on xD hot if its her phone friend filming the whole thing.. naked contempt the whole time xF

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Wow….. this is easily one of the best stories I have read on here. Scratches pretty much all my itches. Outstanding. And it’s your 1st story? You knocked it out the park my friend. Please please don’t stop. You are an outstanding talent!

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Agree with all the other comments. Great story

NotmanenoughNotmanenough22 days ago

Danny is dumb, the all point of getting fuck by the boss is that you don't have to work xD

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Very hot scenario, but I can't help but feel bad for the guy. Hopefully someday he finds another (probably closer to his age) futa who actually likes him for him, and doesn't just treat him like a fallback for when there isn't a woman handy. (Of course, she'd still keep him caged, like a good boy should be.)

GeezLaWeezGeezLaWeez17 days ago

Really good story, love how descriptive you are I can picture and hear everything that’s going on. The dirty talk was fire, but maybe a little more onomatopoeia’s will set this thing off. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Story is meh, could be good but its too nasty, the start is too fast, no world building or character depth. action is okay if a bit generic and unnesseary nasty, the ending is cringe. the boss is a pure pycho no redeeming quality, a copypasted thing that hates mans jet fucks them cause reasons, its a badly done atemt to portray sexual dominance, ends up being just hate full nonsense. too one dimesional, the guy isnt even a character, just a plot device without any effort to seem like an accual character with agency, its a fleshlight. why the fuck woud he stay at this job if he doesnt get anything out of this arangement, cause nothing state that he is interested in this lured into it or blacmailed, it just happens for plots sake. Its a bit retarded. Honestly you sould tone it down a bit and try to write accual characters, have some dept to it, i know its just dumb porn and all but it would elevate you out of the dime a dosen nasty sado femdom/futa writers, its way to many low effort stories, its not mutch point writing a near identical copy of a storry with a boss employee pover dinamics skin.

AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Double down and make it nastier just to spite this (^) comment.

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Had fun writing this story, if there is interest I might continue. Have some ideas about where to take it, as well as some stand-alone stories. Enjoy. plexi135@proton.me