All Comments on 'AMA - The Boyfriend Ch. 231-240'

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P_DoggP_Doggover 1 year ago

Best damned series on Literotica

HiFrancHiFrancover 1 year ago

By “all in”, does she mean that she’s going to go back with them?

NewtScamanderNewtScamanderover 1 year ago

Wow, great chapter, left us hanging but that just keeps me wanting more. Can’t wait for the next release to read the claiming of Cattie. Love your work, thanks for sharing!!!!!!

TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

This just keeps getting better and better. I just hope that Sherri and Heather get their due at his hands, or the App's.

The2thdocThe2thdocover 1 year ago

Keep it coming. Great story, great build up.

GodultraGodultraover 1 year ago

I hate Heather cunt….. but a peak in to her bed with the sister might be interesting.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidropover 1 year ago

Nooooooooo . Break you and your cliffhangers will be the end of me . Awesome as always , keep u the fantastic work.

GonzoLifeGonzoLifeover 1 year ago

Awesome as always, I hate the cliffhangers, love the Te.....nsion! Cannot not wait for the next part.

D1noSlayerD1noSlayerover 1 year ago

Fantastic writing. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Man, been waiting for that to happen the whole story!

MNHammerMNHammerover 1 year ago

You’re shaping up to be a solid HaremLit author. Keep it up.

Oberon72Oberon72over 1 year ago

Great story and well written. C’mon man, give Cassidy a break…

Hotstuff1PHotstuff1Pover 1 year ago

OMG. Keeping track of everyone's relationships and now how Robbie and Cassie are.coming to peace with their own is amazing.

Their was always going to be breakups with all the hookups and love being shared. Looking to forward to how the last two days of the trip finish and the counciling that theses two need before they get married.

Lincdaddy8Lincdaddy8over 1 year ago

This story is tied as one of my absolute favorites. Its one i could reread over and over and not get sick of. Please keep the story going, hopefully past the end of the trip.

lovesbingereadinglovesbingereadingover 1 year ago

When is the next chapter coming

lovesbingereadinglovesbingereadingover 1 year ago

When is the next chapter coming

The2thdocThe2thdocover 1 year ago

Ok, I just reread the entire series. We are way overdue for the next drop. Excellent work. But I need to read what comes next!

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlotover 1 year ago

💧 💧-- For the shower, for the tears of joy, for the arousal of ofthe characters, for the emotions running around in my brain (and I'm sure in most of the others who have read this far), and just on general principle. This whole milieu from the start of the party to here, is about as well crafted a piece of writing as I have ever enjoyed. Thank you, thank you, thank you.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Aaaah. Damn. I was rooting for Heather to get her shit together… not that I can say I’m surprised. She’s seemed more interested in ‘possessing’ Cathrine than being her partner. Especially when you consider how much she’s been chasing the sister.

Besides that though the car sex was hot as hell. ^.^

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Heather is a selfish bitch and she deserved to lose Cattie! Solid 5, although it's a shame Tanya is stuck in her job!

Falstaff60Falstaff607 months ago

Not surprised at all by the Heather/Cattie situation. Lesbian couples have the highest divorce rate of any at something in the mid 70s percent and for all the reasons many straight women complain about including abuse. Alternately, gay men have the lowest, in the low 20 percent, with straight couples being around 54%. What can we learn from this? That even women can't stand to live with women, most of the time.

striker24striker242 months ago

At this point the stripper sex seemed selfish and unnecessary (that may change at some point in the future if we learn something new). Great news about Cattie as Heather is a selfish insecure bitch with a chip on her shoulder. Cattie being attracted to and falling in love with such a nasty, shallow and selfish person as Heather makes me seriously question her taste and judgement. I almost wonder if Heather had the app and used it on Cattie, but she seems to strike out with almost everyone else (she groomed Sherry and Ginnie is a huge slut that fucks everything that moves so she doesn't count).

I don't know why Sherry is such a spoiled little bitch but shit happens.

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LATEST UPDATE: January 2025 AMA: The Boyfriend Arc 2 has begun over on my Patreon! You can expect new chapters to start dropping here on Lit sometime in late February or early March, but there 33k words of content available to my Patrons right now! Writing erotica at the vol...