by AndrewStories
Please have a follow up to this one.
There is nothing hotter than real sex, meaning totally unprotected sex like Mother Nature intends it to be. None of that sissy mutual masturbation protected sex.
I lust that all of your future stories have preg risk sex in them!
It's a shame the camp is limited to bleaching Asians. Every race across the world needs a white man's baby.
Decent concept, but your writing skills are sub-par, though not the worst I've seen.
The story should develop to involve only big cock white men. The impregnating should be to achieve impregnating the asian sluts with big cock sons. If they have daughters they should be forced to abort and be bred again. Asian sluts should be used by big cock white men to have their big cock dna attach onto the fertile egg and make a big dock son.
Right from the start. Why is her hand yellow? Have you even seen the skin tone of most Asians, NOT Chinese, who may have a slight tone, but you describe Cindy Starfall. She is Filipina like me. There is nothing yellow about US. We are light brown to very light TAN. When I am in the sun, it has a pretty redish brown tone. This "yellow" is just racist stereotype. I love reading Asian breeding strories, but I hate racism and bullshit DOM undertones. I hope you never get laid by one of us. Doesn't matter if the story is sexy.
I usually try to avoid nitpicking this sort of detail, but I'm making an exception this time because, unlike the leader of the camp, I DO know what a "stockade" is: a defensive enclosure made of vertical posts (typically entire logs) driven into the ground side-by-side. The word you meant to use there is "stocks", but from the description you provide, that is also inaccurate because stocks confine only the feet. On the bright side, you do get it right two sentences later: it is a "pillory". The key point, of course is that I, like most people, don't generally find stockades particularly sexy. I do, however, totally get off on the idea of knocking up a hot girl in a pillory, so in the end this is no more than what I called it earlier: a detail.
To those who complained about it being racist: If you don't like racist stories, I suggest you avoid reading stories that mention race in the title. If a title like "Asian Breeding Camp" doesn't give you a clue about what you're getting into, you clearly aren't thinking, and if you aren't thinking, you shouldn't be commenting.
To the person who complained about the use of "yellow": No, people of Asian descent aren't yellow. Your own prejudices are showing, however, because you made no objection to people of European descent being called "white", which -- news flash -- we aren't. It's usually more of a pinkish beige. I've also noticed that most people of African descent are more brown than black, but I've never heard of one objecting to being called black because of it. If you want to object to the use of the word "yellow", that's fine, but please do yourself a favor and don't pretend it's about the actual coloration of the skin.