All Comments on 'Birthday Pool Party Ch. 55'

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florbustflorbustabout 1 month ago

I love this five star series. Keep the chapters cumming!

ag2507ag2507about 1 month ago

Probably the most important episode you have written. You could extract the confession of the impact of the rape as an exemplar for folk to read and understand that condemning a woman's post rape behaviour is abusive.

I have a friend who was raped at 15 by three guys and she too lost complete concern for her own body. I have written about it and the consequences even 40 years later. The poem has been used by councillors to help victims understand decisions they might make even many years on.

WoodencavWoodencavabout 1 month ago

Chapter 55, I am in awe of how you keep writing awesome chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

TheJoker33TheJoker33about 1 month ago

Such a wonderful read, you never cease to provide a greatcreading experience. 5 stars as always Witty. The drama and complexities of real life definitely make this one of the very best slice of life stories I have read. I am excited to see what happens next in the last remaining chapters.

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 month ago

Rocks as always. 5 stars and packed with action from start to finish and full f DRAMA and entertaining sexual fun. Lots of emotions explored and happy and tearful and just outstanding storytelling. Top shelf entertainment for the enjoyment of the reader. Loved it all. Cheers

WittyUserNameWittyUserNameabout 1 month agoAuthor

@florbust Thanks for the five stars!

@ag2507 Sexual assault affects so many, sadly. :( I hope your friend is doing well.

@Woodencav Thank you!

@TheJoker33 I'm glad you like the drama! I enjoy writing slice of life stories.

@Qwer12 Thanks for sticking with the story! I'm happy to hear you are enjoying the chapters.

cbsteel87cbsteel8729 days ago

Wow! This finale is worth the wait!!! It's getting hotter and hotter!

KintsukuroiKintsukuroi19 days ago

@cbsteel87. I just hope it doesn't result in an explosive cliffhanger and then we're going to have to wait a really long time to know what happens afterward.

@Qwer12. Slainte!

@TheJoker33. I can't say if I'm excited. I don't want to jinx it.

@Woodencav. You're not the only one.

@ag2507. Yeah. The whole, "What did you do to deserve this!?"

@florbust. You know they are!

WittyUserNameWittyUserName13 days agoAuthor

@everyone Chapter 56 has been submitted to Literotica. It should go live in a couple of days.

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