All Comments on 'Bitchy Mom'

Super hot! Hopefully there'll be a follow-up chapter. Five stars and a favorite point!

Fantastic, more please. What will daddy think of her now and will he want her back? JJ should put a baby in her belly and live happily ever after.

Great beginning to a wonderfully told story. Definitely five stars on this one. Anyone who rates it a four or below needs to be spanked just as JJ did to his mother. DocWords, please continue this one.

Fun take on the 'mom just needs to get laid' trope. Repressed housewife finds out there's a lot more to life than just breathing and going through the motions. Are you building this into a multi-part story? Or keep it as a one-off? // If you're open to some feedback: the dialogue feels a bit stilted or staccato. It feels like I'm just reading sentences, they don't evoke a mood. An example with simple <adds> from page 3: "Not bad for an old lady, huh?" <she boasted.> "Not bad for any lady. Mom, you're absolutely gorgeous." <he winked, watching her blush.> et cetera.

Please continue ! She surely needs to end up pregnant so she can stop nagging him about grandchildren . Also more calls from the father as they do naughty things!

It’s unlikely that I’ll continue this. I like that their world has opened up and feel they’re capable of continuing without my help. If I do continue, I can assure you that at 55 she won’t be getting pregnant. Thank you all for the votes and comments.

I would love to read another dozen or more chapters.

I liked it but lacked something. ***

Great story...but I really think another chapter is required. Specifically him taking his mother home and then using the same treatment on his father. Both need to experience new things and after that they will all have a new dynamic in their lives.

"I wonder if dad ever tried duct tape?" - Effin' classic line

And it has a myriad of uses, silencing overindulgent complainers being just one. I hear you can use it to secure relatives uncontrollable hell spawn by sticking them to a wall.

But that may just be a rumor...

Love the dom/sub dynamic and the sexual awakening. More please. Would love to see some anal and DP for Mom.

This is a great story, I hope there is a continuing story.

We need another chapter or two. Maybe she could please both men in her life. This might change her husband's mind about the divorce.

Is she still fertile?if so breed her and keep her dressed down.

Hope you have a follow up to this story!

5/5 as always

I love this story. Make more chapters please

For a straight-laced mom of 55 years she certainly changed a great deal in a very short time. I assume the divorce went through. Thanks, well done.

I hope this is the first chapter of MORE PLEASE?!?!

Damn.

Mmmmmmmmm beautiful sensuous story!!

I would love to see more!!!

Excellent story!!! Please keep it going!!!

Agreed "Excellent story!!! Please keep it going!!!" Please continue and take her deep into her submissive side.

except for the pre-cum.

Continue the story, please!

Awesome story her son finally made her a real woman. You need to continue with more she was bitchy cause she was sex starved!!!!!!!! 5 stars

Very well written in content and mechanics. A great introduction and explanation of behavior and reason why certain behaviors prevailed.

My mother wanted me to take charge in similar manner. Unfortunately we wasted three years until I had the Eureka Moment.

Titillating.

WOW! Sounds like my late mother when I grew up in Houston also! That's one hell of a story. We had our first fling when she went with me to visit a prospective college after my senior year in high school. We spent the entire weekend in bed at a hotel in Austin ordering room service. After that, we continued our sexual relationship until her death in 1994.

Excellent story. Please continue.

This needs to continue on with another chapter 5⭐️ story

OMG! Great story. Maybe another few chapters.

All I can say is WOW! I hope you continue this story

A stroker for sure, although would like to know if her pussy is now bald

Damn, dude, "Chanel number old lady" - can't stop laughing! Excellent story, I enjoyed it immensely!

Continue this great story for another 30 years of their lives, at least. Will look for it.

You must continue this story.

I agree with everyone else. This story has more chapters to it.

Wow, what a great story. Well written and hot. 5 stars.

A silly, outlandish story.

And what fun. Five stars.

A silly, ridiculous tale.

And what fun. Five stars.

Great story. I agree with others, that you need a follow-up. You made it perfectly clear that his mother wants to learn and do all she has been missing out on. You left us all hanging wanting more. Good authors do this, but they also need to deliver. 5 stars

Really needs more chapters great story

I love ti, the poor woman didn't have any fun in her life until 55, no wonder her bitching. Any how, glad the son hit the jackpot in just a few hours. But, is he going to release her into the wild now that she's getting to know these things, or is he going to keep her for his own enjoyment? So many possibilities here, Good work, 5 stars.

More please

Great story. My own mom could be kinda like this, too, and seemed to get worse and more twisted as she aged. I have often wondered whether a treatment plan similar to this could have helped her out any. In any possible continuation, I'd like to see JJ eventually try to give her back to his dad, and instruct both dad and mom on how to make it work. That could be hilarious, as well as hilariously sexy.

Send her back to Dad? Been there done that burn the t-shirt! "Garsh, Dad, you know all you have been through it's only fair I take care of Mom for the next....Oh......35 years!"

Good one Doc! Very creative twist on the Mom Son Genre. Loved it!

Stay safe! Stay healthy! Enjoy life and keep writing! Your fans depend on you!

Cheers

SAGE

5

One of the best

I do LOVE when the mom is requested to wear stockings. That's my biggest turn on. As well as seamless pantyhose. Great story. Had my cock hard the whole way through. I gave it 5 starts.

More to this story please

Good to Great story.!!!

5 stars. Read it at least three times. This definitely needs a sequel, with 3 kids !!!!

Well this one was certainly different. I completely understand her bitching after missing out on so much. At last she finally got to experience the things she had craved all her life. The whole "you own me now" submissive direction is a bit overused though. That usually leads in the wrong direction. I felt like it ended too soon but unless it was going to remain a pure mom/son thing with further exploration of the stuff she wants to try and deepening their love, then it's for the best.

I was afraid that I was going to hate mum, and the story. The wit and pathos redeemed it though. The only 'bad' guy was the insensitive husband and I warmed to the others. Really good. Thanks

Yup, I was thinking it ended too quickly.

Adding further after reading it again, it would have been nice for his father to witness how much his wife had changed much to his chagrin.

Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it. AAAAAA++++++.

Wow! This was one of the hottest incest/taboo tales I ever read!

Reading it again and enjoyed it as much as the last time.

i really would love a sequel tale to this.

Amazing work! Looking forward to a sequel of this story tho.

Really need to add more chapters.....would be nice too see how things evolve.

Wow, hot and really good! Lots of room to grow as well!! More, if you would, please!

Oh, she will need panties at home, or she wil mark EVERYTHING.

That's not an awful outcome, but it can be a little too public if your whole house smells like pussy and has cute little stains on all of the sitting surfaces. I mean, you would have to have a whole other house just to have guests over...

Submissive Mom? Yes please! Man, you really need to do a sequel. Please? You can't leave us hanging like this.. Brilliant!

You MUST add tongue fucking her ass and taking mom's anal cherry and mom sneakily getting pregnant to this story! Awesome story writing.

Thought this genre was incest. However it soon devolved into a heavy BD/SM story of which I'm not particularly fond. 👎

So hot......add few more chapters, anal love, making her pregnant and marrying her

Have read this at least 3 times it really needs more chapters please