All Comments on 'Caught in the Dorm and Punished'

A delightful story! I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing your skills and imagination.

Well, a well written story of the harsh reality of a girl's school without any rules for the headmaster to follow. Now, the punishment was appropriate for the occasion. What I liked was that Matilda was given the opportunity to beat Lucy as part of the punishment. At least Matilda was restrained from beating Lucy too badly but Matilda should have been punished for going too far. At least the Headmaster forcibly stopped the beating and knew that the punishment was ended. What concerned me was that no aftercare was given in sick bay. Why have a sick bay when no care was available? The girls should have been made to apply some soothing lotion to each other's bodies. I liked that both girls soon learned that they would be better off when the respected each other's needs. Will there be another chapter with Lucy and Mr. Roberts?

Thank you anon! I didn’t want any of the staff to be a caring character, so the girls find solace in one another or elsewhere - I could have done more with that. Definitely planning a second chapter when Lucy goes on work experience! Watch this space.

Oh, I did like this! Deliciously erotic and very well written!

So hot! It's very difficult to do something new with a school spanking story, but this succeeded magnificently. Great characterisation throughout, particularly the conflicted desires of the young women, and a truly fiendish series of punishments. Can't wait for the next episode!

One of my favorite stories. Excellet plotting and characterizations. PLEASE write a continuing chapter (or two).