by phoebexoxo96
Please, don't stop here. Need many more chapters. They have all weekend and Monday, until mom returns. Maybe the can recreate the porn scene.
Moves much too fast for me. One paragraph after the scene starts and she's grabbing his cock? Can't suspend disbelief say that point, sorry
As the wife secretly watched from her hotel room marveling how her plan was coming together.
She should of told him she wasn't on birth control and it was the wrong time of the month to nut inside her.
Wife should have walked in from phoney business trip in a sexy kimono with nothing underneath, as planned with daughter (not knowing what movie, but assuming what dad would do) to get daughter to get close: and join in.
Love daddy / daughter stories , reminds me of my stepdad , he fucked me every chance he got , I loved it !!!
Snuggled under the covers watching a movie is exactly what we were doing the first time my dad touched me. It was also the first time I stroked his dick. But it wasn't the last!
Of course daughter wants daddy's cock, but oooo I love it when she resists a bit. Because daddy will have that pussy!
Jeff should have a hairy chest, so when her sexy breasts caress his chest, both have the pleasure of touch -- he with the sense of her breasts caressing his chest hair, and she with the touch of his sexy chest hair!
Well done. The storyline of Jeff's plan to seduce his daughter Danielle during the scary movie with the erotic scene was believable. Danielle's response was perfect. Although this is just a 'story', I would think that she was well aware of her dad's reason for having selected that particular movie, and she took advantage of her similar incestuous desire that they become 'an item'.
Keep in mind, incest begins at home!
Kind of lame and stupid. No character development, so no reason for them to break down and act that badly that quickly. Just not believable for anybody who has any sense. Written by a 15-year-old?
"Watching this with you is getting me so horny". This comes out of nowhere. At the very start of the story she is already so confident that she starts a full-on seduction. Not very realistic. I would suggest having more buildup and character building.
Nice start off, but "Jeff's cock slid into her wet pussy"? No teasing, no rubbing and a little dirty talk before the main event? many elements seemed rushed. More buildup in characters as well as intimate scenes would make it 100 times better.
A much longer build up is wanted. A sort of literary foreplay and then linger longer at the gate to paradise.