All Comments on 'Just One Drink'

This was perfect!! More please!! <3 it’s hard to find some good stories with the perfect kind of dialogue. You did amazing

Tu pense faire une suite où elle deviens l’esclave sexuel/animal de compagnie de James ?

Et se fait prostituer humilier etc ?

I'd read this story and the other parts on Reddit. I hope you continue it and make her be forced to do truly shameful things.

Then Violet learns that taking the video was a felony - and she has the evidence in hand. Both the guys are in for a new experience - the American legal system, which could result in hard time and being bent over the American Standard and learning what getting fucked is all about

Keep going.

Well, she could use the tape of her rape to get back to the others. Most of the folks will want to watch the guys get burned big time and console the poor girl. The police will then find James when one of the others snitches.

However she will probably be blackmailed for quite some time and will have many adventures.

Wow!

some guys are just assholes. i feel sorry for violet.

but she has to grow up and learn to kick some guys in the balls and stand her ground.

I think we'd all be better off if you stopped writing this shit and we all stopped reading it... But it did come with a full warning...

I've read a number of these blackmail stories, and usually found them contrived, to say the least. But we have to be aware that it can, and does, happen. Whether Violet is a 'rape slut' - or is turned into one - is an interesting facet of all this. Looking forward to the next chapter.

~B

I can't even think about this.

It was the Chapter Content info that caused me to look at this story, “going to bed a virgin and waking up as a whore” …do I smell bullshit? I always read the Tags and comments where applicable, I’m really glad I didn’t bother to read this it’s glorifying rape, utterly sickening and completely non erotic. Pathetic freaks who’s only option to have sex is to rape someone.

If you were aiming for the common and healthy fantasy of the Rape Fantasy (CNC) you missed it, what you’ve produced is (I hope) a fantasy story about rape.

Rape is evil and often has a lifelong devastating impact on the victim, Due to our broken society women are held accountable to a sickening double standard, pushed into believing that they shouldn’t have sex (only sluts fuck around), shouldn’t enjoy sex (good girls don’t do that) shouldn’t ever wear revealing clothes (because they’re asking for it - apparently men are unable to control their sexual urges), shouldn’t go anywhere alone particularly at night (see previous reason). All that whilst men have sexual freedom, having a high number of sexual partners is pretty much encouraged, it’s damn near cause for celebration. Please don’t be a fucking sheep and buy into the bullshit. Slut-shaming is NOT the way forward.

The logic behind the Rape Fantasy is that it enables the victim to have sex guilt free, she was forced therefore no blame is associated. Unfortunately one of the really cruel points is that if she gets wet or worse has an orgasm(s) then that must mean she enjoyed it? Somehow that’s supposed to make her the guilty party? The reality is that the reaction is a physiological response to stimulus, it’s to prevent damage. Every woman I know would if possible choose the alternative ‘lubricant’ of blood from the damage caused by rape. That at least would leave no doubt in the victim’s mind that it really isn’t their fault. Speaking from personal experience, BDSM with a reliable trustworthy dominant can go a long way to healing the trauma.

To Anon who claimed to have killed two rapists - it’s an extreme but understandable reaction. I genuinely hope you don’t get caught. Unfortunately the death of the perpetrators isn’t guaranteed to make the nightmares go away. Only time and healthy coping mechanisms can help. Please tell her from me that none of it was her fault.

Tess (uk)

Apologies (sort of) for rambling

As a woman with an over exaggerated rape fantasy life, and far more than a little submissive, I loved this. I love the sense of guilt Violet felt along with being totally turned on by it also. Found myself wishing I was Violet.

Far better than most of the stuff on this site even if it does 'glorify rape.'

Yes fiction but reminds me that most people are arseholes.

I love Dominant men who take what they want from me❤️❤️

It always baffles me when people click on a story, read the warning and then call the author names and people who enjoy reading this sick. You know what would be sick? This happening to someone in real life but this is a story; a fantasy. Anyways great story, I enjoyed it. The inner conflict, him turning out to be a horrible person - it was written in such a way that made me marvel not only at the dark subject matter but at your writing skill too.

There are women that are drawn to aggression and force, it’s proof that the desire for them is real. Also it allows them to still remain a “ good girl” but still enjoy what happens.

It is erotic, but I shudder to think who this may validate, enable and justify. Are there no women in your lives, a mother, sister, someone you care about?

This story was excellently written. And it ruined my day. I should have guessed from the description and warnings the content, but I kept going with it anyway. This reminds me of the band Whitehouse. You know them? They rely heavily on shock value to communicate the erotic aspect of their music, but this is something entirely darker. The predicament faced by Violet is something that, unfortunately, all too many real world women face and although I'm aware this is something others have said I want to be clear that as soon as I got to her realization I instantly unhornied and, it should go without saying, lost all interest in getting off to the story. Either way James' character traumatizes her once with the rape, and then it is multiplied by the "decision" he gives her of living the rest of her life as a victim in silence and possibly subjected to more, or the worst possible public humiliation and shame that would completely dehumanize her to the world and everyone she knows. The worst part of this story comes when he jests in saying that she's a rape slut who likes to roleplay something is happening to her which 1. detracts blame from them, 2. undignifies her and 3. attributes to her qualities which would make people believe the most traumatic event of her life is a source of enjoyment for her and she is perverse for that. If anything this was good because it reinforces that rape is truly the worst thing in life. Without saying too much I'll share that I had a similar traumatic experience before I could fully remember and it's resurfaced recently. I'm finding ways to come to terms with that through porn and erotica like this, but it's really fucked with my gender identity and now I can't tell if I'm a trans girl because of genuine dysphoria or I just feel that way because I want to be a submissive slut for someone to brutally fuck me and dominate me and the only way that would make sense is if I was a little girl (or at least presented that way). There is also a nonsexual side to it but it feels like this sluttification fetish really got me there by means of thinking about sex bc the intrusive thoughts (milder) stories give me stuck with me in a way that I had this breakthrough while imagining him fucking me as a little femsub. I'm mainly a musical artist so I really want to incorporate some stuff from that part of my life into what I write but this. This story is what I will pull from when I want to remember the sheer pain I've felt and been forced to live with. In the most sincere way possible my heart goes out to anyone else who has suffered from something remotely similar, been drugged, raped, blackmailed, slandered and/or totally subjugated. I never comment on Literotica but I had to make an exception for this story. If you're reading this I love you and good night.

I just wanna say that this was a well written story. I really enjoyed this story.

Beginings of a submissive fuck doll