All Comments on 'Make You Make Believe'

Beautiful story. Wonderful

Very hot, very hot.

It felt pretty rushed, and it would have helped to have more separation between the first night and the weeks later in the transition. Overall, still a cute story, and I hope you do more chapters of it.

cute story, happy for them :)

Loved it. I think a mtf transgender girl would be the ideal girlfriend: feminine, with a cock to boot! The best of both worlds. I, myself, sometimes like to fantasize that I am female, though I would never pass for one. In reality I wish I had a friend like this.

Very cute, very fun and very much what I would do to help break an egg I saw that was into me.

A beautiful story helping someone to find their true self. Loved it.

such a wonderful tale. alittle mean to have her hypnotised to begin with but without that small opening lotus wouldnt have gained her true form. id love a small follow up of the couple meeting the parents. i get the feeling lotus parents might be confused at their new daughter and daughter in law.