All Comments on 'Milked by Doreen's Coffee Group'

by MarianneFromThePool

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QwertoQwertoover 1 year ago

Very good. But it need more proofreading. You call Carl Craig several times. I think I read similliar story with Craig as main charakter. Maybe you took inspiration from it or you are the author. Either way cant wait for next part maybe prequel about how Carl milking started.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

eww why did you make it gay near the end? too many stories like this it happens..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Try to keep track.

Is it Craig or is it Carl?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hot story that had me wishing I was in that room getting to play with him. Looking forward to reading more of your stories :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Really not my cup of tea.

MarianneFromThePoolMarianneFromThePoolover 1 year agoAuthor

Sorry about the Craig Carl thing. I changed his name halfway through and didn't spot those mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love your writing style. Please write more!

rareneedrareneedover 1 year ago

Keep up the good work. I love the theme and immediate action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. I'd love a chapter explaining how Carl/Craig got into the situation where he is being milked daily by his aunt. And btw I like Craig as a name better than Carl, if you're still trying to decide.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Are you the same author as 0ra11yfix8ed? I loved the Miss Swanson's Boarding House stories. I also like this story except for the inclusion of Mr. Martin (that's a big turnoff for me - not into gay stuff but that's just me).

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Brother, you should have started this story from the start and slowly built up the plot. Where carl gets into a series of compelling situations where he has no other option but to strip for his aunt and then later for the group of ladies step by step. The slow built up puts the audience in the edge of their chairs(in this case readers). There is no head to this story from where it all started, rest everything looks fine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Doreens friends should all bring someone and have a group milking

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun story! I liked creepy Mr Martin teaching the ladies how to play with Carl’s prostate. Maybe a separate story of Kevin being milked & poked as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

Mr. Martin kills the scenario -- for me at least.

Needed much more DETAILED slow playing with his cock and balls by the ladies.

Needed more dialog about what was happening to Carl with Carl being interrogated.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Carl, Craig who is who? And how did they get into this situation? An introduction is needed.

HotAss4UHotAss4Uover 1 year ago

Wonderful. Lucky Carl

cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

Great fun, instead of a book club they have a milking club!

Well done, except for the names getting mixed up, Carl Vs Craig.

maddictmaddictover 1 year ago

I thought it rude to not have the cream for these ladies coffee. Well another day then /`

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good prejise.

Ruined by Mr. Martin's involvement.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I request the Author to add these stories in a series if they are intended to be. I had to pick the first story after seeing upload date.. not the ideal way to search

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Looking forward to additional submissions along the same lines. Hoping those next door neighbor boys are included.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Love your Carl series! The more the merrier, have as many people as possible, female & male of all ages enjoy Carl being stripped, played with & milked.

AgingAthleteAgingAthlete8 months ago

I have really enjoyed this series, reminiscent of my "Night Flight" story where a wealthy dowager gets to play with a caged husband on a flight. Unlike some of the other commenters, I really enjoyed Mr. Martins appearance and fun with Carl. I am the same age as the author and fully understand the aged vs youth dynamic--has absolutely nothing to do with sexual preference and everything to do with memories and wistfulness for times gone by.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Hello

How does it feel

You spread like peanut butter? They say

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

How is it possible to mix up "Carl" and "Craig" so many times in just the 1st chapter???

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Did you copy and paste this story from another writer and change the name of the boy?

You obviously didn't read the story before publishing it as you would seen the blatent mistake of Carl becoming Craig and back and forth.

MarianneFromThePoolMarianneFromThePool6 months agoAuthor

I changed the guy’s name. Sloppy but hey…

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Wow. Read the comments, everyone is a critic. Loved the story & am reading the rest of your work. You are becoming on of my favorite writers on this site. More Carl, please.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved reading how this young boy is milked by the older women. Wish that they had made him stand on the coffee table and helplessly squirt out a ruined orgasm, having all touching stopped as his THING exploded in humiliating volleys before them.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Love stories where young men surrender to milking from older women. Having the women comment about his submissive sexual surrender during the performance is both stimulating and humiliating to/for the young subject.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great femdom male surrender story. Wish the neighbor had been his wife rather than the male neighbor. Having her show the group about prostate usage would not seem to imply a gay interest. Love the femdom control of his most precious capability help to humble and humiliate the lad for the ladies. keep up the milking stories.

InForIt2InForIt24 months ago

it was a fun story until a Mr martin was introduced.

If it is not in the gay category, at least give a warning or a tag that some male-male action is going on!!!!!!

Just not providing this warning makes the story a 1 start, no matter how good it was up to that moment.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I really loved Mr. Martin's involvement. More male on male please

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Contrary to the other homophobic comments, I was turned on by Mr. Martin's involvement and his expert hands. These stories can be for everyone

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