All Comments on 'Over an Ex and Under a T-Girl'

Wow! Great story and writing! Please continue with this story and / or more of your works! 5 stars!

Wonderful so hot of a story

very sexy story

You had me really worried there the middle of the last page, as I'd loved it up until that 'dark turn' reminiscent of the other kind of story. I like my stories cute and loving.

Lucky man

Loved it, a nice storyline and well written

Holy crap I'd love to be Jeff! A fun, funny, sweet tgirl who's hung, gorgeous, AND thicc? Sign me up! I hope there's more...coming...with these two. Great story!

Great story and the meltdown from Tiffany sounded so real as I have been there before and seen some serious psychos. Not with me but I had some frighteningly fucked up friends who believed if your life isn’t in danger then it isn’t a relationship worth having.

Looking for chapter 2

I thought it was a great story

I'm not one to read multiple page stories like this one, but I got so enthralled in it I couldn't stop reading it till the end. What a twist on a love story it turned into. Lots of compassion, and tender loving care all wrapped into 6 pages of literotica. Looking forward to possible future chapters to the love story. It's definitely an amazing love story, Jeff came a long way outside of his hetero lifestyle in 24 hrs.

Really liked everything except the mind fuck towards the end. Too reminiscent of personal experience with messed up people. Otherwise it was really fun!

I usually just read and rate on the mobile but this Story really hit me in all the right places and really made me hot and steamy. The love brewing between Jeff and Gwen, despite her insecurities was so heart warming and her rising horniness and dominate love making was just fantastic. It was the best representation of soft dom that is closest to my fantasies. and Jeff willingness to yield to her made this story a one silver bullet to my heart and crotch area. defiantly gonna read it again. This honestly one of my favorite stories and i have been reading here a little over a decade. gonna share this with the significant other hopefully this can give her some ideas.

Damn.. Tiffany had the 🔥 for everybody. She was playing no games SHEESH

id so love to find my Gwen, so is gwen going to get him in panties soon ?

I like your way of thinking MissLouise. Gwen does come across a very attentive girlfriend with a lot of motherly instincts and he’s just unexpectedly spent the night. Poor little Jeff will probably need some clean underwear after his shower and I’m sure Gwen has something nice she could loan him (or even find some nice cute sexy little panties that Tiffany has left behind). What kind of mummy would she be if she didn’t?

I love this story. Good job. I really hope there will be another chapter. I think the scene 'under the table' with his friends would be so hot. Maybe a bit of feminisation? I am going to read your other stories. Looking forward to your next work ;)

OMG! What an awesome story! I loved it SOOOO MUCH. A few months ago I was involved with a hot T-girl named Summer. She was a black goddess that was very well hung also. Never took her measurements but she had to be 8 inches long and so big around I couldn’t close my hand around her cock. She was so big I couldn’t take her up my ass 😩 and I tried too. I could only get half of her in my mouth too. Unfortunately I had to tell her to leave because she was smoking Meth. 😵‍💫 I would have loved to have been able to get her inside me she would have been the biggest I’d ever had. SIGH

Great story! I’d love to read more about Gwen and Jeff as they grow their relationship and experience more new things.

Perfect Dom!

Well written, great characters, some romance, and sizzling hot sex scenes. This is one of your best. Thanks.

Gwen's pretty much the ideal girlfriend. Poor Jeff never stood a chance. Love how meeting him brings the hesitant dominant inside Gwen to full bloom. Wonderful story. Very sexy, very sweet.

Hot as hell!! Thank you! This is your best story, although they are all great

Gwen is literally perfect, my dream wife

You had me on until you put in a guy ovulating? WTF? Great story, and I love the trans sexiness. Wouldn’t mind trying one myself, but don’t go total stupid shit and write in a guy is ovulating so it’s safe for a cock to come in his ass. So disappointed. Had to stop reading at that point.

Great story! Gwen sounds delicious and fun. I love longer stories like this and your did not disappoint!

Also, I can’t believe the fucking idiot anon who thought the ovulating man was meant to be serious. They must not understand humor. I thought it was funny!

Much better! Less of a forceful dom. Good balance. Tiffany still needs to be put in her place.

Hope you come back soon TGP ❤️

Excellent

Lovely story with a fantastic storyline. All of the characters are adorable with an individual personality. Wonderful all around story. There is a real potential to expand this story as to how the relationship developed, i.e. how Jeff changed, was he feminized, become a CD, live as a full time woman, etc. Just a thought. 💋

Veronica

A great story...5 star

Though I got a little bit scared when Gwen tried to prank him about the whole thing being a set up...lol

A fun story, would love to see another part maybe involving Jeff other friends Dave and Rita (if possible)

Yes 🤙🏿

Great story. Some stupid comments below that are beneath the quality of the story. Veronica’s ridiculous comment below about continuing the sorry and further developing the characters, i.e.,, feminizing or cross dressing Jeff. Why? Why isn’t he fine the way he is? An otherwise straight male, who wants to be a “normal guy, who happens to have come to find that he enjoys being dominatied by a hot woman he loves who happens to have a big, talented cock, , who Gwen uses it to pleasure him. Why does he need to be femonized, be made into a cross dresser? Can we stop that kind of tired trop? Enjoying his girlfriend’s big, talented cock does not required him to want to be a girl. Got it “Ronnie”? Ish

Loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Great setup, great advancement, great climax! And another great climax...and another! And rounded off nicely with a good suggested future and some more immediate mischief! And it may have only been a joke suggestion but imagining Rita joining the two of them is amazingly hot!

Thanks for the story and keep up the good work!

Gwen is the perfect balance of sweet and dominant. When she said it was all a setup, I was like "No, no, please no". Thankfully, she was just fucking with him. Great writing as always.

Really good story. I am a big fan of happy endings! Would like to see Tiffany schooled...

Story telling at its best! So enthralling! Gwen is the stuff of hopeful dreams! Hope to one day have and be a plaything like these two!!

Love this story. Pls i just wish you wrote another chapter ;)

WOW!!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥💓💓💓

First story of yours I"ve come across, really good job! :)

"Shecock"? It's one thing to have tiffany use trans slurs as a way to paint her as a bad character. It's another to use them in the title and the body of text, and to unironically use the term "shecock" as if it were sexy. While the story premise is good, it comes off as purely fetishising of Gwen as a trans woman and doesn't actually respect trans women. I'm certain many trans women would be made uncomfortable by the language used here and would not find this sexy; I'm not even trans and I was made uncomfortable by the use of language here.

Guys like me love mtf t-girls like Gwen, because we hope that they’ll allow us to reach into their panties and crawl between their thighs - just like Jeff did in this erotic tale - and stuff our submissive mouths with some of their sweet, perfumed girl cock.

In all my years, I have had less than 10 such bi-encounters but there was only one who was truly a submissive bottom. She gave me the best blowjob I’ve ever had but actually I was disappointed that she only wanted me to top her though. Getting gently filled up and breed by a girl, in the same way Jeff was in your story is my idea of heaven on earth.

There’s no way I’d do that with a man though. I’m a bi man - not gay.

A love story

I loved it up until the blackmail part. If I were him, I got angry and pushed her away. Went looking for my clothes and said I’m leaving. At that point, she probably would’ve confessed to being kidding but still he would’ve made the point don’t go too far.!

OK, I should really take some time to think this over before I make my first post. If I put myself in his position, I would get really angry, push her away and get ready to punch her right in the face if I truly believe that was going to happen. She might say “wait stop it’s not true I was just kidding. I was just trying to see your boundaries”. I would still walk away pissed off start to get dressed she would have to come up to me and convince me otherwise. I would have to make a call to Tiffany along the lines of “I know what your plans are that the two of you did. I don’t know how you think it was going to work”. of course if it was fake, Tiffany would go. “What the hell are you talking about asshole?”. At that point I would realize that Gwen was just making it up just for me. But I still need that blow job to convince me otherwise and calm me down!!

Jeff's closet is made of air at this point. Dude can't even act Bi convincingly. He will probably transition too later. Gwen has successfully retained everything which comes with a "shecock" except the pronouns I guess.

Gwen is pretty much my dream girl. Thanks for this sweet and sexy story.

Wowza great story and Gwen sounds wonderful.

Very good!

One commenter snidely said his "closet was made of air". So what? He discovered he is a fondness for cock and getting fucked. Dudes discover that all the time, and at various ages. Loving a trans person puts you in queer land. It's not a big deal especially in make belive erotica. Ditto that she's a top and super hung, just fantasy. It's not for everyone.

Loved it. Thank you.

Fantastic story, and very well written with very good characters and a nice length you can sink your teeth into. A must read!

Kudos for writing a Top without making her insulting or viciously vulgar, it’s refreshing.

Incredibly exciting story! I’ll give it a 10/10 even though I almost stopper reading in the middle of the “mind fuck” play. To much for my taste since that level of emotional manipulation shuts me down.

You lost me at blackmail.

Pity. She sounds hot.

Once again, I get pulled in, great story. He seems turned a little quick from pussy to cock, but she’s enchanting so he goes with it. I like the dynamic between the two that she’s willing to give up her ass for him. But the bullshit at the end, the blackmail… Too much way too much. I would point my finger in her face and say fuck you we are done and

Walk towards the door and let her try to convince me that she was just joking.

Nice! I liked your use of rarely heard words

Fantastic keep up the good work

>calls shrewish women harpies

>bruh bruh, dey just be bitches now

>git wid deez times

Should be a second part

Love it

One of your best. More about love and less about total dom. Excellent! Should have sequels.