All Comments on 'Penny'

by crialia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wow

must be a follow up ,loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Woah!

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
more please...

i loved it! hope you will write a continuation...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

wow that was unexpected and very hot !!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great narrative

You definitely know how to write and how to make people come! : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Story

Wow. That was so well written and extremely hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Impressive!

dewdropdewdewdropdewabout 12 years ago
hmmmmmmm

Delicious!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good

It's good. You should know though, I've been to strip clubs before, and the guys definitely hit on the female clientele. I had two try to pass me dollars to give to the girls, and one patted my ass. It gets old. They wind up paying more attention to you than the dancers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

nicely written this deserves every reader`s vote.(cinder)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice Job

I am soooo WET I need to go in the bathroom and relieve myself

crialiacrialiaabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks...

... for the feedback. I was surprised. I'd written this ages ago and never posted it because I wasn't happy with it. Didn't expect it to be so well received.

GirlintheMoonGirlintheMoonabout 12 years ago
Love it!

Sexy and well told! Thanks!

stereoguystereoguyabout 12 years ago
WOW!

Very well written...dripping with passion! Please write more...

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 12 years ago
Fantastic!

The story was intense. The writing was exquisite. Oh, my, but that was impressive.

jxr955jxr955about 12 years ago
Great writing

On a site with so many great stories, the well-written submissions stand out. This story is superbly written, and it is one of my new favorites.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Bravo.

Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please make another part

Wow! This story was amazing. Please write another part

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very Well Done!

This story crackles with eroticism. I'd love to read part 2 where she gets to return the favor to Penny. Bravo!

WerewolfEnthusiastWerewolfEnthusiastover 10 years ago
Good story

Like i said good story actually i take it back great story. Wish there was a second part honestly to see how it would turn out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Right on the spot!

One of my favorites now. I just love these genres. I hope there are more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
My fantasy

This is exactly my fantasy, it made me feel so special

Wish I could meet Penny

Helen xx

VyresOfTheArtVyresOfTheArtover 8 years ago

Penny was playing this gal like a fiddle, so damn naughty.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImagination7 months ago

Re-reading this story. Again. It's still exquisite. Brilliant work.

Thanks so much.

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