by crialia
You definitely know how to write and how to make people come! : )
It's good. You should know though, I've been to strip clubs before, and the guys definitely hit on the female clientele. I had two try to pass me dollars to give to the girls, and one patted my ass. It gets old. They wind up paying more attention to you than the dancers.
... for the feedback. I was surprised. I'd written this ages ago and never posted it because I wasn't happy with it. Didn't expect it to be so well received.
The story was intense. The writing was exquisite. Oh, my, but that was impressive.
On a site with so many great stories, the well-written submissions stand out. This story is superbly written, and it is one of my new favorites.
Wow! This story was amazing. Please write another part
This story crackles with eroticism. I'd love to read part 2 where she gets to return the favor to Penny. Bravo!
Like i said good story actually i take it back great story. Wish there was a second part honestly to see how it would turn out
One of my favorites now. I just love these genres. I hope there are more of it.
This is exactly my fantasy, it made me feel so special
Wish I could meet Penny
Helen xx
Re-reading this story. Again. It's still exquisite. Brilliant work.
Thanks so much.