Shemale Surprise

One of the hottest stories I have read

Please please please tell me there will someday be a sequel?! I keep coming back and rereading in hopes that one day there will be.

Loved the shemale surprise. Would love to be used with my wife by a dominant shemale.

Great story! I am a straight 67 Y.O. guy, married for 43 years that loves oral sex and am bi curious. If I can't talk my wife into a 3-sum with a student, the next best thing would be a beautiful woman with a dick.

An easy read well written. I felt the urge many times as I read.

Would love to read a second part of the story with all characters involved in some way or the other

Robert embraces his side he has just explored and ends up being everyones bitch

The writer has a way with her stories

Have loved all her stories i have read till date

very hot story,,thanks it made me cum

I do hope there is a continuation. Endless permutations as it seems like at least one of the wedding males has cottoned on to Mia's domme side. The teen mistress element is hot and the incestuous eat my mommy bride cunt undertaking suggests Jenny and Mary will be drinking from the same fountain soon ;)

great story i started to cum on page 2,,thanks,,next chapter please

a little too verbally abusive for me at times... and I would tell Mia that she could only be with his wife if he was present! OR... he could be with the teenage girl his wife was sub to alone... And no more surprises!

But I loved the basic story of finding out Mia has a cock!

Would love that to happen to me but my wife went off sex some 25 years ago so now it's just me dressing and looking for cock to suck and ride.

Oh please continue the story. There are so many possibilities on what could happen. I love your writing and have enjoyed everyone of your stories so far.

Is there going to be more to this story??

Great storie can’t wait for more about Carrie then the threesome wit Mia & Mary & Robert

Second time reading just as good as the first time....AL

Of all the stories in the genre this one does the best job of portraying the married couple as actually communicating/consenting/supporting each others' activities. It still isn't perfect at it ... but for being the best it deserves 5 stars.

I wish more stories didn't lean in to noncon being *real* and kept it as role-play among partners who care about each other.

Awesome story ..made me imagine myself inplace of Robert...heheheh

Greatest story in this category. Deserves a sequel!

This is big bucket list fantasy for both my girl and I. Because of our businesses we have to be very discreet, but enjoy both sexes equally. My girl reminds me of a girl I dated in college who had a friend with a bi brother. It was a party party and we all ended up naked in bed. That night changed my sexual outlook. We have both been with crossdressers and transexuals, but a hot shemale eludes me. I'm not sure how far she's taken her urges.

fantastic,,great story, made me cum without touching myself,,thanks

Love get fuck from her big cock 🍓❤👅

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@Anon2 I agree, it is the hottest/spiciest shemale-sex-story on here! I came 2-3 times to it.

Well, besides the fact that he could have had intercourse with Mia earlier, especially since his wife said that she would have nothing against it, if it were a shemale, it was a good story. Four out of five stars from me. Was that a weird tactic from you to make the story longer?

Sure would have liked to read what life was like when they returned home.

Thats the hottest piece of literature in all of recorded history

invoked great sexuality and was extremely well written..you covered all of my desires and i stroked as i read

I'm not sure how I would react to this opportunity

Best story I ever read

So the wife has been cheating on her husband for a long time, and is rewarded for it. Not my cup of tea, the disrespect and lack of communication is an excitement killed to me.

The story can’t in there give us more

I loved this story very much and hope it keeps going

Too much yapping.

Oh this is the hottest story I've read yet....bravo

Love it; my best time’s have with a shemale; love the cuddling, the company; to enjoy a wonderful 69 till I’m drunk with her cum, to follow a mutual ass fucking

Oh what I would give to be taken by a trans like he was, with my wife bound to a bed and being fucked by her teen playmates!!!! Great story, I can't wait for more!

I like lots of married couples would be willing to have 3ways with a trans. I know I like it and I want to take herbs to grow my tits but still let my cock work.

very hot story mmmm

Please, please, please, revisit and finish this story line! It is much too open ended and in need of at least 2 more chapters!

Such a great story, Shemale stories always turn me on.

Being gay top or bottom is great stuff. Same lesbians submissive or dominant is also great. I don’t think you’ve ever written anything about an adult white male in your stories who is not depicted as a complete idiot or small dicked fool or asshole.

It would seem anger is your muse.

We are waiting with curiosity when the continuation of the story comes, it is unfinished

Will there be a continuation of the story? I wonder what Mia is going to do. Mary And what did her husband do

Enjoyed the story. Don’t know why it’s taken so long for me to stumble across it. It really begs for a second instalment, the characters are good and there seems to be more story to tell. Stand alone I still give it 5 stars.

That would a sweet eye opener even more with instigating from the wife along with her own desires❤️👅

I was going to give it a 5, but even as role play, I'm turned off by the derogatory name calling. You don't have to call someone a slut or bitch or cocksucker or faggot to show control. That's just Tasteless disrespect.

very good thankyou,,had me dreaming about being anally fucked,,,,,,keep these stories cumming

Great story hopefully there more to come

Hot,... but needs to be continued when the get home. Want to rezd about the fuck fest when Mia and ffiends get them home

This story is my guilty pleasure. Always coming back to it after a while. Although it may seem like a long shot, I desperately hope there is a part 2 where Mary and Mia 'cuckold' the husband. Plus, adding her teenage mistress to the scene will be just as hot.

Shemales are beautiful, wonderful and sooo much fun. Thank you.

I never have had a she-male and it give me such a hard-on to share with my wife. Wow!

Wow. I was a cross dresser as a boy married very young wonderful at first I knew she was fucking her boss our oldest son is not mine. She fucked my boss, my friends, at least two women I know of. Then in our mid sixties she confessed. I thought you deserved to know. I asked her so you realize this is killing me. She said I started fucking my dad and his friends when I was 12. Got some therapy found some glory holes and started catching up.

I agree can you please do a part 2.

I know this was written years ago, but it would be great if a part 2 was written that followed the rest of the story. Not only the threesome with Mia and his wife, but also including the teens that took his wife.

His faithful wife is nowhere near as faithful as she leads him to believe.

And why does every story that involves a guy exploring his bi side always devolve into humiliation and name calling. Very highschool. I think a lot of authors need to grow up a bit and enter the 21st century.

please do part two... or story of his wife and her mistress

Loved it.

I hadn’t read this in quite some time and as expected, it’s just as good. It’s like a fine wine, it ages beautifully while growing an intoxicating bouquet.

It was great but don't stop there!

I like how this couple is able to explore their fantasies without rancor. I like the shemale sex. Not so much into the humiliation. Still a fun read.

Oh my god that was so hot. I’ve been with a few transgendered women over the years and it’s always a great feeling when they fuck your ass. Your story deserves no less than a 20 star rating…….. 🤤

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Hot story. Would love to be him and serve a shemale. I hope to read more. Great job

I love how the wife I involved in her husband getting taken by a big shemale cock, and is taken herself too like a pair of little sluts.

I'd love my wife Rhian to watch me take a huge shemale cock in me, and her to whisper in my ear that I look so hot and adorable being fucked hard!

As I take the huge spray of spunk in my ass I shoot into my wife's panties and she feeds it to me then licks the shemale Dom clean ready to fuck her as they put me in a little chastity tube!

This has been a fantasy of mine and this story just made me think of this and got me so hard!

So ENLIGHTENING!!!

457. Interesting that the wife set up the whole thing including her own submission. We got few of the details of Mia’s activities with the other women. Those are left to the imagination.

Terrible

Absolutely loved it!!!! I'd love to be with a shemale!!! Great story can't wait for more of your work. Thank you!!!

Love it!

I need to be Mia’s bitch

Loved it hun

This story is fucking hot!!! Now all I need is Mia's phone number !

Baloney. Rape pure and simple. They'd both be in prison for a LONG time. You NEVER imagine that there would be any fallout from your characters actions.

Bi far the best, Hottest cock hardening story I have ever read.Thank you and please a sequel!

I like it wish that was me in the story

My all time favourite story on this site. I've lost count of the number of times I've read it. I sincerely hope that you eventually write a sequel in which we see more of Mia dominating Robert and Mary.

I aspire to one day write stories a fraction this quality. So well tailored together.

Would have liked to see what happened after they all got back home.

Loved this story. Very sexy and hot. I also like shemales I never have been with one but I think I would do everything he did in this story..

Tom

My favorite story by far. I would do anything to see a video made from this story. It would be amazing!

WoW!! So incredibly fucking hot!! This is my dream, my fantasy!! I came soo much jerking off multiple times to this story & my cum tasted great too! The best part is that my 1st ex-wife is named Mia & I kept picturing her with a big, fat cum spewing cock.

Great fucking story silkstockingslover!! 😋🤓

Nooooo, I need more!!! Great story. Would love to see a 5, 6, and 7 to this.

Wow!

You are the very best writer on Literotica. Just the very best.

Extremely hot. And the wife set it up.

So hot! Loved to Wrap my Lips around your Tip as you Cum! For a Sweet Release 👅👅💦

Incredible story. Couldn't stop reading. Can't believe how turned on by it I became. Makes me wonder if I would ever give in like Robert did. Unfortunately we'll probably never know.

Wonderful story! About a third of the way through, I realized that I had read it several years before but apparently did not rate it or leave comments. On the one hand, I apologize for not commenting the first time around. But on the other hand, I am glad that I didn't because I feel better prepared now than before.

I recently came across a quote that goes something like, "If you want to avoid criticism. do nothing, say nothing and be nothing." While I do not wish to bash your critics, I mention this quote to support and encourage you to continue writing and posting your superb stories.

Robert didn't just give in to Mia out of the blue. He had read shemale porn and fantasized about sex with one, including sucking cock. Mary, his wife, was aware of his infatuation and set him up with Mia, a friend she knew to be transsexual. In addition, he was aware of her desire for a lesbian encounter. They had even joked half-seriously about their fantasies coming to fruition.

With this prior conditioning, it is not surprising to me that he did not resist the unfolding agenda orchestrated by Mia.

Speaking of Mia, I see her in a different light than some others. Instead of a controlling, domineering bitch, I see her as a confident woman who knows what she wants and is determined to get it. While seemingly aggressive, she appears to have keen insight into the human psyche. These attributes give her the ability to get people to do her bidding. Just as she seduced strait-laced Carrie in a matter of minutes, she easily could have made any of Robert’s fawning male co-workers her bitch without much effort.

Finally, words like “faggot” and “sissy” are no longer seen as insulting or demeaning. Instead, they are now embraced with pride by those who identify with those labels. Robert was far from offended when called faggot by Mia. Instead, his arousal appeared to intensify as intended by Mia. Far from anger, he responded cheerfully by referring to her as “Mistress”.

Once again, this was a wonderfully, well-written story.

Fucking hot,I so want you to have your way with me.lol

Very good.. as always. I loved it. it so strengthens my fantasies.

The story was ok until the humiliation and slave and mistress talk came out and now how his wife is a sub to a friend friends daughter and Mia, just to much the fun flirting in the car was good the teasing great but the couple becoming subs is over used

One really good story, lets have more. jildijow@outlook.com

Your a excellent writer! Even the things I probably wouldn’t do, I was persuaded that could with the scenario you painted… very liberal wife.

Every time I read this I CAN’T stop visualizing how awesome an experience that would be!

Wildly hot please continue

Quite convoluted...Mary going down on a hairy cunt got my attention...personal fave...very doubtful her teen mistress(es-?) has a muffin

Absolutely Great story. I love it.

From the tons of comments, I see that there are a lot of kinky perverts like me out there!

Your story is totally HOT, one of my absolutely favorites and ticked all of my boxes in one way or another; shemales, nylons, nasty sex talk, oral sex and anal sex!

As much as I wish I were, I'm not a shemale. I'm a totally gay crossdresser and a bottom. I'm not, like in your story, interested in girls and I don't live with anyone. Although we don't live together, I do have a steady boyfriend.

There is something about nylons, especially pantyhose, that makes me sooo horny! It's not just how they look or how they feel as a silky and slippery dress rubs against my pantyhose clad legs, there is just something about them, a nonphysical feeling that can't be put into words, that just screams sex!

Like you said in your story, sucking cock comes so naturally, it's just instinctual. I love to suck my boyfriend's cock, even after we are all fucked out and he can't get it up again.

I love it when my boyfriend talks dirty like that while we fuck. It drives me into a sexual frenzy when he tells me how he loves his little cock sucking sissyfag, cum slut. It drives me to a sexual frenzy when when we are fucking and he tells me how he is going fill my cunt with his sperm and knock me up.

loved the story please have part 2 with all the people Mary, Mia, Carrie, Angela and her mother while Robert watches

Amazing..I hope there will be a 2nd part to this wonderful story!

Wonderful story, very erotic., no it was damn horny/ I wish I was in Robert's position

Loved it, a great fantasy to have. Part 2?

Loved all the twists and turns.

I love dominate shemail stories, I too should try

Beyond awesome, absolutely delicious story. Please continue!

This one made me create a new library titled read again. Thank you

If there was ever a story that deserves to be continued, this is it!

Love all of your story. Would love for you to add to this like what happens when they all get together

This story was so hot and had me hard the entire time! Will there be follow ups? Damn I hope so.

Everything you write drives me wild, lol.

Great story! Who wouldn't want to be dominated by a gorgeous shemale? And while his wife is getting the lesbian ride of her life too? Excellent incorporation

Got me so hard I stuck a vacuum cleaner handle up my ass and had a prostate orgasm. Then I stroked my cock and cum in my hand and swallowed every drop

One of the best, well-written stories I've had the pleasure of reading on Literotica. Altho the shenanigans get increasingly unlikely and complex, that's what fantasy is for. A real pleasure to read, thank you!

Too much use of derogatory name calling during sex was a but of a turn off. Very predictable from the start.

Wish I was that cock whore and cum slut.

Sillliwilli@gmsil.com

Wonderful. I xould like to be the bitch. Suck the shemale before bending and take her big cock in,my sluttyass

Solène the bitch

Decent story, but by the end I really disliked Mia. She started out seeming like a cool girl, but by the end it was clear she was actually a manipulative sociopath... I think it would have been a much more fun story if she hadn't turned out to be such a bad person.

It always continuously makes me so hard to realize that I definitely could be turned into a cocksucking faggot without any resistance.

Wonderful, sensual story, wishing I was Robert! My clittie is dripping.

I dream of sucking huge she make yummy juicy cock

I need a part 2 in a hurry!

Also, I hate the word faggot. This is for a gay man. Our guy is not gay. And the deal the wife made is unfair. She is with multiple people and he is with just one. She gets to be fucked by Mia but does he get to fuck Angela and her friends? A long talk is needed between husband and wife before anything else happens.

Yeah I get it it’s just a story, just my thoughts.

I really loved the story. Definitely a fantasy of mine, sort of.

Don’t agree with giving up the wife or any plans that were made not including me in the conversation.

A lot of criticisms of this story boil down to "I don't agree with the characters' morals, therefore I find it implausible/unsexy." This ignores the fact that erotic stories, for the most part, are designed precisely to show people acting outside normal boundaries. If an average person's day consisted of fucking the first random attractive person they encountered after leaving the house, we wouldn't write stories about it. It would probably become a staple of stand-up comedy:

"Don't you hate it when the person you bang on the way to work ends up being the least attractive person you meet all day? And there's no way to put 'em off without pissing them off! I mean, every so often you'll meet those beautiful people who can afford to be picky, and they're like, 'I'm saving it for Happy Hour!' Me, I'm just hoping I can make it through my thirties before I have to take Viagra every morning....Isn't that the worst? You feel pathetic, she feels unattractive, and it's been scientifically proven you can only say the words, 'It's not your fault' about 20 times in your life before suicide starts to seem like a valid life choice!"

So no one really wants REALISTIC erotica; we just want the words to make a movie in our heads that holds together for a few minutes at least. Personally, I couldn't buy that a man who's THAT obsessed with "she-males" (I know many have problems with that term, and I respect that, but it's perfectly believable that the main character would use it) wouldn't IMMEDIATELY start looking for little "clues" as soon as they met up. To me, that's what kept me from identifying with him, which meant I really didn't get into the story. But it didn't offend me in the slightest.

And anyone who can't guess that a story in the "Transsexuals and Crossdressers" category, that starts out introducing a married couple, will have extra-marital sex at some point, doesn't quite grasp the basics of this whole 'erotic story' business.

Would like to knowhow thing went after there weekend and the plans the she male had made and how that turned out.

I loved it so much i wish that something like that would happen with me

Love the story! Would like to hear from wife’s perspective. Maybe how the flirting and teasing all started her down this path!

Waste of time reading.

@Anon its almost like the story wasn't written just for you.

Why are so many trans women written as such mean cunts? She had the perfect opportunity to seduce him and break his cherry gently, and he would love it and love her. But no, she rams her big cock (always a huge cock, mind you) right in and pounds him hard. A virgin coundnt handle that. Its a quasi rape situation. And why the hate speech? Cocksucker use a a deragatory term, faggot, ass slut. Ugh! Ruined it for me.

Loved your story mmmmmm.

Love your stories they are a total turn on I'm hard most of the time thinking of playing with Mia only I'm the dom but we all get it in the end keep writing

Nice, I like the dialogue, especially in the car.

Who didn't know she was a shemale from the very start, and if its as big as I'm told that ass fucking wouldn't let your faggot ass fart!!!

It would be cool to hear from the wife’s perspective of her encounter with her lesbian experience more

I have been having fantasies of that happening to me with the only difference being me forced to dress like a slut with bright red lipstick (my weekness) but I have tried & tried but can't find a she male that would like this virgin ass! Oh well I can dress and fantasize cause I'll never get that lucky!!!

that got my man clitty so hard! I would have let myself cum a few times, but then I wouldn't want to read more.

Was quite sexy, up until you made her a mean bitch. Also, i hate the word faggot. Its really hate speach. By the way if hes a faggot the so is she. I dont think a trans woman would call anyone a faggot.

I thought this was a very hot story and was stroking the whole time I was reading. Some have said it was unreal, but as another said, its fiction. Others said it was too obvious that Mia was a shemale and yes I knew that pretty early in the story. The surprise for me (and it was a nice surprise) was that Mary had set the whole thing up. I was sure that it was mainly Mia's idea, and Mary went along with it and helped it happen.

For those that found it unbelievable that a straight guy would suck and get fucked. A couple of years ago I never thought I'd ever touch another cock, but since then I have stroked and sucked cocks on several occasions. That part of the story is quite believable.

Like many others, I eagerly await a sequel. I won't suggest where it should go from here, that is your decision. But I've liked several of the suggestions I read from others. I will say that personally, I'm not interested in a psychological analysis of their marriage. This is an erotic story site, thats what most people are looking for on here.

I thought this was very good! Instead of making the husband look like a helpless idiot like many stories do, you wrote him as a willing participant. I thought it was very good!

As a married man that has allowed my wife to sleep with women and in return she has allowed me to sleep with trans women this story is incredible and VERY believable!

Absolutely any man with this fantasy confronted with a sexually aggressive trans woman is going to submit. THAT'S the fantasy.

Also, if your partner is experienced the first time is, at worst, uncomfortable. Once you get used to something in there you can get pretty rough and it feels good.

Bravo sir, looking forward to more!

WOW !

Like a lot of men, he talks a good game. But when she forces him to his knees in the elevator (which I don't think he allows her to do in the first place) and shows him her cock, I think he stands up and tells her, firmly, that nothing further is going to happen. And that when he gets home he's going to have a talk with his wife. Because if she's cheated on their marriage already, then said marriage may be over. Fantasy is one thing, reality is another. Guys may think girls sucking face with another girl is a hot idea, but when it comes down to actually doing it, no man wants his wife comparing his kissing to a woman's kissing. So I didn't believe for a minute that he allows Mia to do anything more than talk to him. Add to that the fact he was an anal virgin and your description of Mia ass raping him would have left him with a torn, bruised and bleeding sphincter muscle that would have required hospitalization to repair and this whole story goes down the drain. I find it much more believable that if Mia had continued to taunt him he would have punched her lights out. Badly thought out drivel.

1 star

Please give us more on this story! Like a part 2 and a from Mary side

Loved the story and it would be wonderful to see it from Mary's point of view also.

You leave Us hagin like this.. I Wanna know what happened.. this is or was getting really good.. DAMN that was Hottt..

Hey anonymous straight guy? Love to get together with you we could read a story or two from this great author and you could suck my cock bitch lmao I’m gay but always willing to let a so called straight guy live out his fantasy sucking my dick but your gonna have to eat my sweet ass first 😘 Jasmine you really do mess with these straight guys but a guy like me has just what they want

Making straight guys wanna suck cock is what you do best Jasmine I know I’m straight and your stories make me wanna eat dick

I want her cock in my ass and then I want to swallow her loads of cum. Love that cock.

Love this story I couldn’t stop jacking off . I’ve never sucked a cock but I want Mia’s cock in my mouth my ass where ever she wants.. give us chapter 2 please

Shemale Surprise part 2 please. I REALLY want to see Mia follow through on her threats/promises.

Would really like to read the second part with so many things going on in the story there's lots od idea's for a good sequel

I'm sure that your fans and followers are always sending you ideas to turn into stories or asking you to write sequels to ones you've already written, but I hope you hear me out when I say you need to write another chapter to Shemale Surprise. The anonymous comment entitled "Line...", while missing the emotional point of the story, does raise the legitimate question of the aftermath of the events described. A story exploring the lies that have been exposed and the new roles and relationships that must evolve for the marriage to continue. While the emotional tone might be difficult to write, the lusty fun and revelations this could lead to are something I'd love to read.

Think about it?

your story made my old dick stand up and take notice. I have sucked another man's dick but never ass fucked... I really enjoyed sucking him off.. Then my wife joined us and as he had his dick in her pussy I was sucking on her clit and his dick at the same time. Your story brought back memories... Don't stop now !!!!!!!

Why don't we start a movement? I love your dirty mind! And I want to be Robert.

I totally enjoyed it to the point that I began to fantasize of being on the receiving of a big juicy dick, leaking warm tastey pre-cum. Being fucked by the most beautiful & lovely woman who just happens to have a dick beneath those la perla panties is just so sexy.

Before receiving any dick, I'd like to get ready for her by taking a nice hot scescented bath, plus I'd shave my legs, including all body hair. So I'd be perfumed & silky to her touch. Wich would bring us both pleasurable sensations as we touched & caressed each other.

But first I would love to wrap up her gift by stepping into a sexy pair of panties then sensuously bring up my legs until they kissed my pantied behind, after reaching for my garterbelt and fastening it from behind. I'd sit on the edge of my bed and begin the beautiful feminan ritual of gently slipping on my nylon stockings by lifting my left leg, with toes pointed, I start rolling my nylon up my leg. Passing my ankle, then calve until finally reaching my upper thigh and attaching it to the garters (Repeating the lovely ritual with my other leg). Once my nylons are properly on love to step into a pair beautiful black high heels & go in front of the mirror to admire the lovely process as it moves towards beautiful femininity. I then pick out a sexy black underwire lace bra, putting my arms through the sholder I bring it up & hook it up from behind like a lady should.

Now I decide what I'm going to put on, should I wear a dress or skirt with matching blouse? As I'm looking through my closet I choose a beautiful & very sexy pencil skirt in black and a beautiful gray silk blouse. After stepping into my pencil skirt & buttoning up the blouse I finally go over to the vanity and apply my makeup and in the end adding a very sexy, yet feminan shade of pink lipstick.

Now that I'm ready, I begin to wonder how's she going to fuck me & for how long ? Also how hung and thick she is has me eager to find out.

I wish I was a shemale’s submissive slut. Sucking her cock licking her ass, then she fucks my ass with her hot yummy tranny cock!

I would love to have a shemale suck her cock then make me wear nylon's and female panties under my regular clothes

Once those pretty, pretty feet went to the dashboard I was severely hooked. Now, if I could only get tied down!

Ticklishsoles

I would love to try this out.

Am I the only one that would love to read a follow-up which begins with mia and carrie then works around to mary

Absolutely in love with them,someone introduce me to Mia,,,

This has the life to go on,Robert doing Mia

Mia doing Mary, All three going at it,and more characters coming in the story

I have read your story a few times over the years. I cum a few times each time. Thank you. I have now had the experience of sucking cock and also anal cum from a cock fucking my boipussy with a man cock. I love a cock in me so much

The cum is so intense like no other.

you are the best erotic writer, can't get enough of you

Loved this, so need a sequel

Love this story. So we'll written. And very hot. Please continue with the story.

I want some cock in my ass fucking me hard and coming together. I came several times with my dildo vibrator in my ass as I was reading this story. Where is my Mia?

I want a real cock deep inside and then cumming inside my mouth. Love It. I want, no I need more. I will find me a Shemale to suck and fuck.

I too wish to be taken but not so hard that Mia did to abrutly to him the first time, my step dad did me but took his time and it was wonderful, very little pain and it quickly went away and the pleasure was just out of this world. I really like the idea of him getting fucked by Mia in a wedding dress as I have always wanted to wear one and suck cock or be fucked while I was. I tried to put on the neighbor girls wedding dress that they were storing in my mothers garage, but alas it was to small but I still managed to jack off and cum big time on my hand and like a good little cum slut I licked it all up. Please continue this story it was well worth reading, of course I am going to have to change my panties now as the ones I have on are all wet. da.cd@frontier.com

Amazing

Almost everything you write appeals to me, especially stories like this. I am more orally fixated than anally fixated, though; the thought of licking, sucking, and swallowing a shemale's cum is incredibly arousing to me. Being spit roasted, or forced into a shemale bukkake with numerous beautiful shemales excites the devil out (into) me! Wish I lived near you so you could set me into these stories and photograph me doing all these things. Imagine how neat it would be to have photos of me (or video) with a dozen shemale cum loads in my mouth and on my face! In fact, you could write a story with me in such a shemale gangbang orgy! Thanks so much for your stories, Bobby Rob1911a1@aol.com

Hands down the hottest story I've read..ever. So many kinks so perfectly blended in.

Give us more of this story. I mean st have jacked off 6 times reading this story now I want to suck Mia's cock.

This story is so good I want to read more. Does it continue does she make him wear her wedding dress what other things do his wife and her make him do. Does he get to stay the man in her eyes what direction does their relationship take. Please continue

This made me cum so hard. Very wet sheets

Thank you

I think this is day 4 or 5 of reading your stories since I discovered you here. This is easily the best. Wish I could have given it 6 stars.

I love how she ratchets up the domination and humiliation as it goes on until she is ultimately calling him a faggot while telling him all the things in his future. Please give us that future and come back to these characters again and again. Maybe even tell us the wife's story as she was at the other wedding. That would be so hot.

For those who have criticized that they new all along she was a transsexual. Of course you did it is a story called shemale surprise. Reading this isn't about that catching you off guard it is about fantasy and the characters. For those offended by the term faggot this is a fantasy where those who get off on submission and humiliation can enjoy themselves. It is not meant to be a place for political correctness.

Please please please come back to these characters Jasmine.

And / or a parallel story from the wife's POV.

This really need a sequel or 5 or maybe one with the POV of the wife

I read this story with my GF/Mistress reading it too while I stroked myself with one hand and pumped my bitch pussy with the other we both loved it. She can't wait to watch me suck a cock and I can't either.

let the girl fuck you in the wedding gown in front of your wife

I want rough scolding gangbang in front of my wife with kids and cum....please write...please this is my request..please

As always your stroes are well written. Thnx for that. I especially like the gay/cuckold/submissive tales. This one ... 5 of course. There should be a sequel!

The moment the VP wife was brought in I went limp. When the bride was brought in I was hoping that the cuck husband would snap a pic of them and send it to the groom so he would divorce her cheating ass and disown her daughter. Also she did not plan this for him. Bull fucking shit, she totally planned everything so she herself could enjoy it, the fact that he was gay for dick just happened to be a lucky occurrence. When he finally figures that out I hope he divorces her and leaves her ass out on the street. Well written story but i thought this would be shemale, male, female. Not shemale dom, male sub, female dom, female sub, and especially cheating. I have no stomach for it. I was kind of hoping for a threeway relationship. You know the three of them fall in love and stay together. Instead it's just humiliation after humiliation. That ruined it for me so yeah. Keep on writing i guess.

Liked the story,shame that there isn't a second part.

Indifferent when it comes the insults, but the rest of the story was hot. Any chance of a sequel?

Why use gender shaming taunts? Okay, I understand you wanted to debase & humiliate Robert but to use sexually charged pejoratives is disgusting & crude. I expected better of you but you just gave in & slut-shamed the characters. You can do better, & you chose not to. Shame on you!

This story is offensive & an insult to the LGBTI community.

It's a beautiful story. Do you plan to write what going on when the husband follows the shemale?

your story writing talents are amazing

I realized MIA was a shemale as soon as she started talking in the car on the way down to the wedding, and yes I guessed his wife not only agreed to it, but set it up, I am surprised Robert did not figure it out by himself, that is one messed up marriage, I would have not done it, and I would have had some really strong words for Mary when I got home as well.

Maybe not of all the genres you write for but the lesbian and trans categories you rock!! You set up some of the best scenarios! My opinion only, (but I'm sure many share) you are one of the best writers on this site! I hope there will be more of this story later!!

Every sentence held me in anticipation, hard and mind wandering, want to be Robert. As I have been with numerous She-males, I could literally picture every part of the story and relate. My only set back was Robert being labeled a faggot. Cocksucker, yes... Her bitch, yes... slut, yes, of course. Faggot, to me, seems a derogatory word for homosexual. Everything else was wonderfully exciting. Thank you again!

But soooooo good! The "in her wedding dress" was a wonderful touch.

Make this into a porn film...... You'd make a fortune!!!!!'

Very Hot..... I'd love to be there !!!!

Excellent story and very well scripted. Would like to read a sequel to this story. Extremely erotic and well paced.

It was pretty good until you made it into the submissive lesbo wife/ sissy submissive husband cliche. The only people turned on at the end are the ones who get off on wife-stealing stories and want their wives taken from them.

This is probably one of the best written fantasies i would like to experience in real life!

Can you please write a continuation about how Mia cuckolds Robert and makes Mary pregnant?

Great story. I have a ladyboy in the Philippines who I'm writing to and was living your story through my deceased wife and her. Beyond 5 stars....thanks.

The minute he discovers what's what why would he continue? Is he gay? Is he Bi? Nothing in the story indicates that. Since he was an anal virgin I think it would have been more plausible that she/it ripped his sphincter muscle so badly that he needed to go to the hospital to get emergency surgery to stop the bleeding. It seems more likely that he would have bitch slapped her and left to find his wife and tell her she is about to be divorced. Just too implausible. Nobody could be THAT dumb and nobody would want to expose themselves to every disease known to man. Bad story telling without any thought given to consequences.

That is one of the hottest stories I've ever read! I wish I could live it out myself!

So the wife sets this up but has already said she will fuck him her so basically making the husband a cuckold not what he agreed to and the ease that she did this makes you wonder who else she's fucking

Please continue this story from where you left off.

i so wish i were Robert

Silkstockinglover, please ignore the stupid comments from Anonymous. Besides being a gutless wonder too afraid of using a real name to blast your story, his/her comments are way off base and very unrreal. Please ignore those comments, for they do not represent the rest of your reading public.

Keep up the good work. We all know that your writings border on the kinky and always feature women in nylons. Another great effort. I can't wait for the sequal.

Please write more, this is one of your best.

I loved it.

Dude, fucking top notch.

i must have cum 5 times!