by DocWords
Great series, great addition. Only part im not sure of is the end with Cletus and Alexandra
Being a huge fan of greek mythology, this series has been an amazing read and I cant wait to read more.
The sex is getting repetitious at this point but I do like the underlying plot. On to Madagascar! 4*
this story would have been better without the sharing of the mc's women. to me it's such a turn-off
Another great installment to the series; Alexandra & Cletus....? Who knew...but, stranger things DO happen!!
The Madagascar trip is quite anticipated; the sex....mmmeeehhhhhh...just wanna see how DocWords does with the storyline...
**5** stars, again, and a vigorous round of 👏 applause for the author!!
I were wearing a hat, I would take it off to salute you. I truly applaud the interaction between a large group of characters. Nothing trite, the sex acts, while inevitably repetitious, have not become banal.
I hope '23 will be good to you!!
Paul
Didn’t need the gay father and daughter story line in this,,, it’s almost like a slap in the face to papas
Sorry but the story line is getting convoluted. Now his women are looking to fuck whoever they fancy. Cletus being the example. Looks like it is time for Gaia to get rid of Alexandria and modify the prophecy. That sequence changes the whole family dynamic. She's no longer wife material. Nice experiment by the author, but doesn't slot smoothly into the story line. 3 stars for this chapter.
Na story took a huge turn when Alex lost his only solo woman to her gay father, that didn't need to happen. I'm only wondering now like so many other comments here how it's going to impact the rest of the story. She's not mamas material in my mind anymore. At least his other woman have only ever been with papas not random or gay men..... Who's obviously not gay, what the hell man
Wow so much negative comments on sex between Alexandria and her father. For me it was a very pleasant and hot surprise. Another 5 star chapter.
So not is it enough that there is way too much Lesbian shit going on but now a gay dude is taking another woman from Alex as well? You already have him sitting alone and getting just pity fucks from his grannies. Why don't you send him to the other side of the globe like you did his father and just get it on with a massive Lesbo fuck fest? That's where you're taking this anyways. Seems when he does get some action you have to throw in other women at the same time to achieve your Lesbian fetishes. Also. why do you have Ariana always talk down to Alex, always calling him names and shit? It's gotten rather old by now don't you think?
Wow ... so much negativity. The biggest issue with the Alexandra/Cletus pairing is that she had previously said she didn't want to be with anyone but Alex. You can probably excuse that by saying she had thought her interest in Cletus wasn't relevant because she didn't have the right parts for him to want to be with her, but that feels a bit shaky to me. Between that and my personal preferences, I didn't like that encounter, but since the family orgies have always been part of the story and sex with family members other than one's primary partner has never been a problem for anyone, it isn't really anything that I think we can complain about and probably wouldn't have bothered me as much if it had happened 'off camera', so to speak.
Also, for those who said it was disrespectful to Alex: it was previously established that family traditions allowed a Mamas to have sex with someone other than Papas as long as he gave his permission first, and Alex had already said he would give permission if they asked for it. That is exactly what happened here, so there was no disrespect according to the standards established by the characters themselves and everyone needs to quit making an argument that is clearly unsupported by the text.