All Comments on 'Summer Sucks!'

Loved it, and we hope that you will follow up with a series, as I am sure that you will have plenty of fans.

From a U.K. fan

Tx you slay me! Loved it. As the other person said, this would make another fine series. Hope you're working hard on the next installment of CvN. :)

This was a nice read, and if you are out of touch with the now teen generation, very appropriate and in tune. Thanks!

definetely make it a series; well written

Very good... I agree.. make it a series...

All your stories are great and this is no exception. Hopefully you will keep this one going as well as your others!

Really enjoyed the story but dont stop what is an obvious series at 1 story

You have got to expand on this great theme.

This was an engrossing story. One that every guy who has a heartbeat can remember dreaming. Only you told the story better then I ever thought. Please keep this story like going for just anouthe chapter or two. OH to be 18 again and know what I know now.

combines excellent technical skills with a wonderful and erotic imagination. The stories always flow and never disappoint!

I liked this. A regular guy with maybe a little larger than normal dick gets the girl. I would like you to continue the story focusing on his relationship with his new girlfriend.

An excellent story for all the average guys out there.. I hope that there is a continuation

Great premise and characters. Loved how the story was interwoven with erotic details without being over the top. Much enjoyed.

Loved it.. man that sounds like a bomb job. *jellus*

There was a few errors, but I knew who/what was being refered to. 9/10

He will owe his brother forever! What a wonderful thing for a brother to do for his younger brother.

Well done! Thank you.

Got my vote!

Loved it! Well put together. Please put more together!

Thanks for all the positive comments.

This story was getting long when I wrote it, and at seven Lit pages, seemed too long to post in a contest. When the contest is over, I'll probably go ahead and post part 2 since most of it is written already.

Thanks for your support!

What a fun summer job! Keep it up!

I can only hope that there will be! Fantastic!

Keep the Stroy going it rocks.

You definitely captured the teenage first nerves and giggles perfectly in this story. I love how you let there be real feelings and emotions, amongst all the hot, sexy fun to be had by all.

Loved the story. I'm checking back every day to see when the next section is posted. I can't wait

The world needs more stories like this. And I need more of this story.

Cool story Loved the job idea...

But another story would be nice.

Add more stories or chapters to his experience during his summer job and perhaps beyond.

Seriously - please continue the story. It was fantastic!

This would make the start of a great series.

As usual: unusual premise and setting. Well written. Good detail. Keep them cumming.

This is just some bad-assed writing! Excellent!!!!!

Great story. Well paced and well written. Would be great to read more of it.

Please continue this story! Best ever, no lie.

Seems you have decided not to continue the story as it was submitted more than 2 years ago and nothing since, please do continue the story.

You don't see the ned for ANY buildup at all. It's OK, fuck, suck, felt good, let's do it again. He starts out a virgin who's never even SEEN a bare tit, andt next thing he's naked with his cock geting sucked. Boom!

All the potential for discovery is simply blown by (pun intended).

A waste.

This could be a great series of a young man becoming a hired out dick. You really need to tell us more of the kid taking care of all the women in town.

Would love to read about more of the characters adventures !

But please write a sequel soon!

Write more of this story, it has such a great story line.

Sequel please... Pete & Anne as a couple (jealous girlfriend). Also want Lenka in the scene.

... I ever saw a setup for a great series, this is it. More, please!

we want more...

hope you and more chapters

That seemed to be too good a story idea to just end there. I sure do hope there might be more episodes!

Great story. Really hope you follow this one up.

Well done. I really liked how you developed the story. It deserves at least another couple of chapters.

pete became a whore!

maybe he could talk Sandra into expansion and pete's little sister and mom could do part time whoring to!

A male fantasy blown into memories.

Dayum! That was great! Best job ever.

I do hope that you follow up on it. What a way to pop your cherry both of there's. Entertaining story about a nerdy young man and Sandra WOW. If I were him I would try and get as much practice in as possible and suggest to Sandra that I would be okay with her keeping me in her bedroom all summer. Oh and in my favorites

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So well done and lots of fun! Thank you!

I’d love to see this one play out...

Very entertaining and very enjoyable! Looking forward to more!

Sandy needs to told that the mask only works one way. His identity should be protected as well.

not talking about the whole boy toy sex slave it's just that there's no way an 18 year old wouldn't know his penis length down to the milliliter and how it compares to the average in various categories such as his in class,city,country,continent,world,compared to others of the same race and of others his age etc ....

I loved it! Realistic dialogue and pacing in an unrealistic story, but realism is vastly overrated.

Should do another chapter

definitely needs another chapter or four. Awesome, thanks.

Outstanding! Would like to see a follow-up story.

Great story used to fantasize about it myself.

A great story cut much too short.

Need more... MUCH more....

Chapter, needs another chapter...... PLEASE!!!

Smokin'😉

Cute little story. You promised years ago about continuing, how about.it?

LeB

It seems a shame that there aren't further parts but I enjoyed it very much.

TO BE CONTINUED, PLEASE.

To be continued, yes?

Wow. Great 5 star story. Where do I apply? I did not know I was in the 3 percent. I have been complimented but I thought women said that to all the guys.

Definitely 5 stars. I know you are busy writing other good stories. When you have a chance more please.

Enjoyed the read.

I see this story was done some time ago. Hopefully you’ll be inspired to continue it.

Oh that’s a great one handed read, made for the boys realise, nicely done

I was feeling below average after all those Literotica stories about 10-12" gentleman's accessories, but if this story has it right, I can hold my head up with the other upper 3%ers.

Damn, now I'm gutted my summer job was pumping gas and not using my god-given talents.

Great story. I encourage you to write more of the story. It’s a winner!

Lol . GR8 fantasy . Well done .

Add me to the list of people who encounter your story 14 years after you write it, and wish for a follow up. The Muse does what the Muse does, but still ……

Unique story line. I like the first person perspective. Keep it up!

Wow. Wish there were more chapters.

More of a vignette than a story, since there's no conflict to resolve. Good one, though.

I could not finish this story. Being shoved into a new situation without being told what to expect is a turn-off, not a turn-on.

I really enjoyed this story. It could definitely do with another part, always good to hear the average guy get a break, especially nowadays. Although it seems he’s not totally average all over LOL0 well rounded characters and a fun storyline.

Ended 2 quick

Could AND should be another part