The Inn Ch. 05

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But she hadn't, and I found her adjusting her riding gloves just inside the front door.

"There he is," she said, looking me up and down. "Got those letters for me, do you?"

I nodded and handed them over. She gave me a handful of coins in exchange.

"There's your nine," she said. Her eyes made a thoughtful contact with mine as she said the word 'nine,' as if to emphasize that it was less than the agreed-upon ten because my letters added up to more than the agreed-upon two. I got the impression she felt equal parts dubiousness and gratitude, wrapped up in a general sense of amusement at my well-intentioned meddling.

"Thanks," I said.

The front door opened, revealing Leyna in her sun-colored dress. She smiled brightly at me, and then warmly and professionally at the orf woman.

"Your cuddly lug of a mount is tied up outside as you asked," she told Kurga. "I hope you've had a, uh -" A momentary flick of her blue eyes turned my way. "- a pleasant stay."

The hulgriff-rider laughed and glanced my way as well, one eyebrow up. "Just so. I'll be recommending the accommodations to any friends as might want to come this way."

Then, with a parting grin, she headed out to saddle up.

"What a mint you must be making!" Leyna said once the door had shut. "And I saw those envelopes - your letters will be getting to the undertowns after all, right?"

"Um, yeah, I'm pretty pleased with how it all turned out."

"I'll bet! And fancy that - there's the imperial post with all the best steeds money can buy, and her ridiculous cock-eyed beast is going to beat them hands down. Who would have put their money on that race?"

I laughed. "Well, there's this character named Halvard who ..."

Holy fuck. Halvard and his gambling obsession!

"Yes?" Leyna asked.

At the end of The Doom of Necromanata, the final joke came from Halvard the Twisted, complaining that the group's misadventures had made him miss a huge horse derby in the imperial capital. They'd just saved the world, but all Halvard could do was grouse at his lost opportunity to bet on Swayback Spindlefoot, a decrepit old nag that ended up winning the cup through a fluke of accidents and jockey errors even though the odds had her pegged for last place.

That race would happen in just over two weeks, and only one person in the world knew the outcome: me.

"Leyna," I said, taking an excited hold on her shoulders, "I think you may have just solved all my money problems. I could kiss you!"

"I have?" she asked, puzzled. And then, in a quieter voice: "You could?"

Suddenly aware of her softness within my grasp, I swallowed, then carefully released her. "Well, it's an expression where I come from."

She smiled and slapped her fingertips against my chest. "It's an expression here too, sillly."

A moment had disappeared. I mentally kicked myself for not just leaning in and planting one on her in that second when she'd looked curiously up at me. Wondering if maybe it wasn't too late, I tried to think of a way to get back to the idea. But Leyna tilted her face toward her left shoulder, where my still-slightly-sticky right hand had caught it.

"Good grief!" she said, nose wrinkling and blue eyes wide. "She's left more of a reek on you than the welf-woman did!"

My face went red. "Sorry, I didn't mean to -"

"Come on, then." With a smirk, she tossed her head toward the stairs. "Let's get you a bath and you can tell me all the filthy details!"

She turned away without waiting to see if I would follow.

But of course I did.

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KnightofmindKnightofmindabout 1 year ago

Corn chips? Corn chips..... You know what? Sure. Corn chips.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 7 years agoAuthor
@JasonRTaylor

I view myself as an educator. This is all written in public service!

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorabout 7 years ago
What a riot!

I'm wondering if I'm going to learn something new every chapter :D

J

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

Haha, that was a pun, not an actual memory lapse. "Remember the Alameda." In hindsight, maybe even worse than my usual puns.

HeisenhugHeisenhugabout 9 years ago

The nuclear wessels were at Alameda Naval Base iirc

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

I'm still trying to figure that last comment out. Maybe the problem is that I just don't remember the Alameda.

HeisenhugHeisenhugabout 9 years ago

Only if you're in Alameda, but close enough :p

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

If you introduce a gun in the first act, someone has to use it to blow up the nuclear wessels in the third act?

HeisenhugHeisenhugabout 9 years ago

Oh my Goddess, it's a magical macguffin! OK, I have to admit to being suspicious of the pen just on the grounds of Chekhov's Gun but I hadn't thought of the ink aspect.

A spreadsheet, huh? Guess that's a pretty sensible way to track them, yeah.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

Would it ruin too much of the magic to admit that I have a big spreadsheet of all the letters Simon's writing and when they'll get where they're going?

As to the mystery of our hero's transportation into Phaeland, I'm not sure how much detail I'll get into, but I will point out that he's used that fountain pen to write well over a hundred pages without any mention of refilling it.

HeisenhugHeisenhugabout 9 years ago

You not fully think out something? Nah :p

I choose to assume this means you have a long, probably tricksie plot in mind. Much more interesting idea.

Slightly less spoilery... is there going to be an explanation of how/why he got there (and along with a paradox get out or not), or should we not worry about it? Both work, I'm just incredibly nosey ^_^

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

Well, you know, if I always write stories where everything turns out happily ever after for everyone, don't you think people will start to find that too predictable? I mean, you already seem to be taking it for granted that Simon and Leyna won't end up being buggered to death by a gang of Necromanata's orcs and ghouls ...

What I will say is, having Juliette die off-camera and never reappear would be a pretty unsatisfying loose end, now that you mention it. So either I have DO something in mind for later ... or I just plain didn't think that first chapter through very well.

; )

HeisenhugHeisenhugabout 9 years ago
Well look who we have here...

Another story of yours that's dragged me in and tied me to the screen :p

I know I'm being a bit selfish, but please tell me that it turns out in the end that the main party survived. Juliette seems far too much of a nice character to die to such a weird quirk of fate :(

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Kaeli420

Thanks for appreciating both the characters and the sex! For me to feel like I've succeeded as a writer, I really have to be satisfied that I've pulled off both the characters and the action, so comments like yours really give me the sense that I'm on the right track. It's important to me that readers find everyone to be an interesting person, whether it's our main characters or minor ones like Kurga or Kizaah or Galufrand.

Kaeli420Kaeli420about 9 years ago
More than just sex

Really impressed. Your sex scenes are amazing, but I'm actually feeling invested in the characters too. I can't wait to read more!

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Best serial in the Genre)

Life has slowed me down a bit on Chapter 6, but it's on its way, I promise! Thanks for the encouraging words and high praise!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best serial in the Genre

keep them cumming can't wait for what's next for Simon and his Inn adventures , so we'll what his new clientele will bring next chapter.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 9 years agoAuthor
@LustKnight

Thank you! I'm hard at work on chapter 6 ...

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