All Comments on 'The Perfect Partner Pt. 01'

Loved the style and pace.

Or stupidity runs amok.

I hate stories like this. Too long with the introduction and then pure erection-killing stupidity.

Don't ever stop

...that's a shipload!

...couldn't resist the pun after that typo. =P

Now my suspicions about what the Cray Super II Computer at the Eli Lilly Campus here in Indianapolis are confirmed. This work is admittedly Sci-Fi, so liberal fantasy license is to be expected, and the story really plays on the dominatrix, sexy boss theme. Perhaps a little more careful editinamazation (see, it's allowed. The overall work is tight). I read this aloud to my partner. She and I both chuckled. A smile to start the day. Thanks.

an amazing story, cant wait to read more of it

Story was well written, not too hard to suspend disbelief.

I know people have their preferences, and like their home beer. But...seriously...there are many many more beers than the piss water national brands (even though I drink those all the time too, hey they're cheap why not). Seemed like some intense US-taste-bashing was happening for not a huge reason.

More please!

More please. What an incredible story! Can't wait to read more.

Great so far.

I was fine with the everything, even the incredibly rapid transformation but what broke it for me was the man'a response to the change. No sentient being with even a half formed idea of there gender identity is going to be calm about having that identity changed . Especially when the person that caused it did so without consent and with mind blowing levels of arrogance, not confidence.

Want more chapters to this wonderful story

know is What happened to the other stories?

Very nice.

I like the plot, but the transformation was way to fast for me.

Great story, but it deserves a sequel or sequels.