All Comments on 'Tommy's Special Blend Ch. 01'

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GamblnluckGamblnluckover 4 years ago

Such a stupid premise it was funny and enjoyable. gave you 4 stars

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 4 years ago

Great fantasy!

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fun Read !!

Quick & to the point, but still kinda hot!! If there is a second installment, it may get even better if Maria is collecting the samples herself !!

csltcsltover 4 years ago
Sweet little Quickie!

5 Stars

booty77loverbooty77loverabout 4 years ago

very HOT so far thanks

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 4 years ago

Hot story. I just wish we had a physical description of the mom and sister. Five stars and a favorite point!

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 3 years ago

Too juvenile and silly for me to enjoy it. Moving on to greener pastures.

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 2 years ago

A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Completely ridiculous but I like it!

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. Part of my editing process is recording and listening to how the story sounds. I recently uploaded one of those and had several listens and a few requests for more. They aren't professionally don...

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