All Comments on 'Twin Swap'

I struggled a bit with suspension of disbelief with this one. Not with Renewal Retreat, but other small things. Why the swap? It happened way too fast, they knew nothing about each other's lives, no reason to think "the grass is greener". It was "wow we look alike" to "whoa, we're related" to "let's switch". It would make sense if it was something like "my job is so stressful, your sounds so easy, wish I could do that" "well let's try it". When Robin talks about going back to work and Layne says they'd wrap his tits... DDDs are not getting wrapped convincingly. The tits are conveniently small when you want and large when you want. And the saleswoman saying he "might" be bigger, when she literally just measured him, how would she not know if she was bigger or not? IDK, something like "That's my size, but I think you might be slightly bigger" but that still basically means the same size. Would be more hot if the salesrep was jealous because she was smaller; really push that Robin was so feminine. I'm probably overthinking, but those things drew me out of the story.

Unusual, interesting and enjoyable ! Thank you

Started out strong but kind of lost focus. Maintaining the interaction of couples would be fun with Layne taking over and deciding to cuck the twins with the Robins clueless husband.

Started strong and hot, then seemed to lose focus. Should have stayed longer on the swap idea, like the title. Even dive into a foursome, then you could add the BDSM aspect. DDD wrap to a man sized chest? Was the wrap from renewal retreat too? Too many holes that didn't make sense when not treated explained that it was a sci fi story

It did not ring realistic. First of all identical twins are of the same sex. Secondly the only thing changed between the two was the chest and voice. The male would not be so open to giving a blow job or having anal sex with the husband. Very gullible people that would believe the curse changed only the lower sex organs.

It started well but got very confusing.

I read it twice and it made no more sense the second time around.0