by Hotcoffee123
I’m not given to you empty praise so I had to read this offering several times since it was posted. I’ve decided it is more impression than lyrical. It doesn’t bounce and flow with rhyme, rather, it feels more like snapshots of physical sensations. And in that, it works very well. I almost feel like a voyeur witnessing something so very intimate and private. How daring! For that I can praise. Bravo. <Smile>