by mmcix
This is a very good story. The character development was great and the story had a bit of a twist. Overall, a five star story.
Great story! Good character development and was hoping that it would end as you wrote it..
Simply incredible. I haven’t been this emotional reading a story in years. It almost feels like multiple stories with one being before Anna shows her cock and another entire story after it’s shown. Such a wonderful piece of writing with a pair of main characters that I fell in love with due to their quirky nature, silliness and overall love of life and each other. Thank you for giving us something so special to read and enjoy.
Lexx
Absolutely wonderful. My amazing wife is my Anna but sadly I still have to live as a male outside of our home. I dream of the day when I can live full-time as my own version of Eve.
When the sex becomes a distraction from the romantic story you have done well. Good structure for Peter. Anna’s character is filled out much later as the story evolves. The tensions from the confusion in the relationship of Anna and Eve. I would love to have closed the loop with Lilly meeting Eve but it’s a minor thing. Well done.
Absolutely brilliant - I just loved all of it. Loving, hot and got m so wet.
I love your stories. they're kinky, but they end up being so sweet and I love it.