All Comments on 'The Atonement'

Fantastic story by a fantastic writer - good to see you back after a long break.

So, like you, Toasty, have the ability to transform a hot tale of torture and humiliation into a beautiful love story. I liked that you included verses that fought against each other, showing the dichotomy of the Bible.

Well done! Thanks.

I was afraid that you would no longer write stories about punishment and pain. Fortunately, this is not the case. Great short story. I will be looking forward to the next ones.

Oh. My. God.

I would be such a repeat offender in that church.

I wonder what happens the second time. Scourging first? Hanging there overnight? A cornu right up the ass? I must find out!!!!

Thank you!!!!

This story could have multiple parts with men, older women, accelerating punishments for repeat offenders, etc. Keep 'em coming!!!

Excellent and emotional story. It shows how religion is easily twisted. Well written and I felt for Grace, thanks. 5*.